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by Florville

person Yaoifanboy
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! BATTLE SCENE!!!!!! YES!!! I love this chapter! I think, personally, that the battle should have spanned a number of chapters... it just felt a little rushed to me, I dunno... but it was GREAT none-the-less!!!! And OMG YOU AND JHONEN!!!!!! *bows to the both of you*
person Yhu
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! This was an awesome chapter! So exciting :-D :-D I can't see how this is going to end!
person sylver
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YYYAAAAAAAYYY!! DESTRUSTION!!!

but if dib and zim are going to take over earth, then wont dib have sleep cuffs made for him instead of having to order them???
person Krimzon
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So pretty...so happy, chest...pain..*dies*

Krow: Hey, you killed Krimzon! Man, this hasn't happened since she was surprised by that pic of Mana and Gackt doing a live performance...her head exploded that time. It took FOREVER to put the pieces back.

To Krimzon: Hey, you! Wake up!! Your going to miss what happens to the Tallest, you idiot! You can't die yet! Wake up, or I will have to hurt you *cracks knuckles*

Krimzon: *groans* Do you mind, I'm trying to be dead in the joy here...

Krow: Too bad. You still need to write that fanfiction...

Krimzon:...you bitch.

Krow: WHAT-ever...

Krimzon: *mutters angrily*
person andalitebandit-6
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! Victory! *dances* All hail Tallest Zim!...and his sidekick Dib -.-;
So now what? Are they gonna annialate both races and then go cruising around in space aboard the Massive? Much as I love happy endings, this one seems to have come too easy...turmoil! I demand obstacles! ><
Oh, and don't feel bad about my being jealous of your kick-ass writer skills! That and it's my own fault for not incorporating more slashy goodness into my fic...ah, well. TWO MORE CHAPTERS TO GO! :D
person EscagirlUK
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeee! Poor Purple, poor Red! ::huggles them:: And, wooo! Fight! For the righ-- ::visciously beats sentence into bloody pulp:: Yay! They beat the armada, go Dib, go Zim, go have mad monkiey sex in celebration! Woo!
person Kayu Silver
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned lately that if I'd actually met you sometime in my life I'd've tried to marry you by now? This is great! Sorry I haven't been around lately, but my computer finally died, and one does not generally read this stuff in the public library. But I get to use my parents computer this week, so I'll be here! ^_^
Much love,
Kayu
person Krimzon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is eagerly awaiting next chapter containing ass kicking goodness...and pictures of the Jhonen*
person andalitebandit-6
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, at first I thought they were gonna paint the ships black with random white splashes to look like stars, but your plan was even better! ;p What IS Dib doing up so early? Couldn't he sleep either? Not without his Zimmy I suppose! XD

As for DQ...with everyone reading YOUR fic, I didn't think there'd be anyone left to read mine...BUT since you've asked, I'll go ahead and post the next chapter now! :D
person Insanity
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, busy week, feel horrible for not reviewing the last chapters. I must say though you're doing a good job of keeping the story tense so it doesn't get boring. I love Zim's quote you threw in as well at the end there, nice touch :)