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person Insanity
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such strong emotions you always provoke from the characters and readers. The end of this chapter had me tearing up. I can understand Dib's reasoning behind what he's doing and just seeing Zim there would add onto the pain, but to have Zim shout at him not to do it...wow, that just opened my flood gates.

I'm a wuss :)
person Krimzon
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! NOOO DIB, NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Zim, save his sorry little butt! Which he should be able to...not enough of a fall to break the Dib's neck...but then, I have been wrong before...

*ahem* Anywhoozle, now I'm REALLY looking forward to chapter 62...
person raavika
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Dib.. no way he's dead though. And poor Zim too, poor everyone! I feel so depressed now..but great chapter!
person pryanimapriizzie
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ek!!! u wont kill him will u!! X(
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm in total shock by the ending of this chapter. I wanted to cry. I hope Dib doesn't really die... *cries*
person littleshipper
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drops to knees* NOO!!!! How could you leave us with a cliffhanger like that?!? You're not gonna kill Dib off, are you? Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens now
person Yaoifanboy
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nyuuuuuuuuuuuu!! Why must you taunt this Invader so? ;___; *cries more*

I sincerely hope the Dib-filth doesn't die! It's too early for the story to end! (even though it's 61 chapters into it LOL)

A truly marvelous story so far, my Tallest... *salute*

~Jake
person vili
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keeps poking the place were "next chapter is suposed to be" NOOOOO Its not fair!!! How could you! such a horrible clifthanger! horribleeeee!!! please PLEASE update soon! Ive been reading this story for so long!
person Yaoifanboy
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! ZIM!!!!!!!! >_<

ARGH!! You fooled me! I really thought there was going to be some romantic little meeting from them in their ship and then you just HAD to go send him off to some random moon! >_____<

I was really looking forward to the romantic meeting thingy-place-type-of-lurvin' *cries*
person Insanity
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's interesting to see the soldiers so loyal to Zim even as he tortures Lard Nar. I actually like that aspect, I suppouse considering how well he has been treating them this whole time they have no reason to fear him or turn against him. To see Zim so vicious because Dib is missing and in someone else's hands is scary, but understandable as well. Like you stated he is going through strong emotions that he just accepted and to have all of this torn away from him is just horrible.

It's also nice to see you updating so freaquently again *hugs* I missed you :)