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by Florville

person Switch
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* *suddeny attacks you with suffocateing hugs* YAY! DIB! and sex! *more love*
person red dragon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as always florville very beautiful and a wonderful piece well worth the wait for the next chapter and could u do some drawings of zim and dib in the tallest suite in the gel bath together and making love on the bed ( i know im a prev but who i'sent today) but neways as i have said before please do continue


urs always
red dragon ( Anthony W. Keiser)
long live the irken empieier
person BurningSilence
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* He didn't die! Oh, that makes me so happy! I'm glad there was such a sweet moment with Zim and Dib, with them saying the I love you's...It put me in a good mood*wink*

This chapter made me very *very* happy! See my smile? ^_^

But...what happens next? I *need* to know!
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Dib survived.. of course Dib would survive.. lol. The fic would have to end if Dib didn't survive! =) Yay for the good new chapter!
person Krimzon
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My words have left me! Come back words! This chapter is worthy of much wordy joy! Come back! I need you!

Okay. I am calm. I was seriously stressed as Zim fought to get into the room to save Dib. Just a great amount of NOOO! SVE THE DIB!! GARG! Then the Loki came and saved the Dib and I was happy. I hope that the fact Loki didn't want to lie to Dib will help him in the future. Because I like the little guy.

I love how Dib even attacked Zim in his despair. It was intense, and just great (remember, I have lost my wordage. It's slowly coming back, but...)

And that love scene between the two of them was beautiful, sweet, and kinkily new. Mmmm. I loved it. I love this fic. GAD! I need my words!

Oh, and I am very glad I was not wrong about the neck breakingness...my goodness. I'm am going to go away now before I make a huge fool of my self and just...yeah. I'm done now...
person andalitebandit-6
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's not over yet? O_O; WOO! You know, this would be a perfect place to end the story, but I'm always up for more! This is great! Although I sorta wish Dib had done a little more angsting...meh! ;p
person Insanity
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just to put simply...Wow. Just as one reviewer said, words have left me. This chapter is one of the best you have written so far. Both Zim and Dib expressed so much emotion at having each other back and all the scences that played out in my head were just lovely :)
person Kharn
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that could be... one of the best chapters in this whole thing... Mabye its just me...

Florville rocks, fullstop.
person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEEEES!!!!!! YOU UPDATED! THAT WAS....WOW!! xD no other words to express it..well there probably is but i can't think cuz u updated!! WOOOO!!!!! and thst was great! XD this will make that stupid religion test so much more bearable! lol
person pryanima
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ppl are complaining abot chapter shortness? hey set me on them i dont mide chewing them out ^_^ ur a wonderful author