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by Florville

person Reyku Sama
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well, that answered my question...Please dun kill the Dibbeh, that would make me sad...Damn you Vortians! DAMN YOU! *Shakes fist at Vortian prisoners* You'll all pay for what you have done to the Dib!
person Kharn
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am worried for Lokis's saftey now, Zim is very cruel and cant quite come to terms with the fact that the Vortian actualy helped and cared about Dib.
While it is a drastic time for Zim he really should slow down and have a lookat the world outside his own.
Hoping for dib to pull through and for more chapters, Kharn.


Ps: Thank you for the message at the top, *huggles*
person dramaelf
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back....I was sawmped with my work for class. I really happy Zim found Dib but now poor Dib is comotos and Zim needs to twist all of their horns till they tell him how to save Dib.
person Krimzon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Sudden Updated Shock Syndrome! So, SUSS? Urm, okay. I had a point...oh yes! That was speedy, dear Florville-san! Neat!

God, poor Dib! He's gonna die, Zim's not gonna be Tallest, and...and...I just don't know what to do with myself anymore! *sobs* The Vindication world is crumbling around me! Why, WHY!!!!!

*cough* I'm okay. I'm sure that whatever happens, it will be DAMN cool. Yessss...damn cool indeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed.

*GLOMP*

And YES! All must read Dark Crusade! Fanally, Kharn will get all the lurve that Kharn DESERVES!! MWAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA
Better late than never, right? XD
person raavika
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, Dib has the worst luck, doesn't he? Also..Electroencephalogram.. that's the best word. I didn't even know what those things were called. As always, great chapter.

<3 raa
person Switch
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe Torture... I dont want to know what Zim will do if he wont talk... wait a minuet... yes I do.
person chatnia
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh, poor Dib! I'm anxious to find out what happens next! o.o
person !!
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waha. I knew it!

Zim should just like...scan their brains to find out the information on how to deactivate it. Of course, this process will be ever so painfull. -gringrin-
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your updates!!! And this was a sad chapter.. I hope Dib doesn't die! How many times have I said that now? Lol. Anyway.. great chapter!
person Tamasama
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Lokis! v.v Poor lil thingy, he's all nice, but Zims still all MEAN! Anyhow, DUDE! O.O That Vortans all foamy? Sheesh... *Shakes head* That's what you get for having horns, I guess... o.O The stilts WAS a pretty dumb idea, wasn't it? ^_^;;