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for VINDICATION

by Florville

person Sylver
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! we get to see 777 again!!

(thats a vortian i do like ^_^)

and dont worry about my wanting to murder all vortians. munin died. and thats good. he was cruel...
person Reyku Sama
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, I was thinking about that after I rewiewed. Took Zim that long to remember the Vortian who is his friend. XD j/k Oh, wow, I completely forgot about gir until you put him in there. Wonderful chapter! I'll be standing by for the next one!
person Kharn
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter, the scene where the soldiers address Zim as Tallest in one voice reminds me of Dead Poets Society.
The swift updates rule, and so do you!
person Krimzon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. Having the entire crew stand up for Zim like that was so very touching of the heart. I l oved it! And I never would have even thought about that Vortian prisioner 777 that had appered in an earlier chapter being able to help! Wow. The speech to the officers was very well planned and even more well written. You have given me renewed hope for the Vindication future (for I seriously thought that either Zim wasn't going to be Tallest, or Dib was going to die...)!

I love how Zim had gained the loyalty of the crew just by being civil toward them and treating them as equals. Something that you had begun to set up in earlier chapters and made the story more complete, when all of the over six hundred crew members stood and swore their loyalty to Zim. I'm sure there are better ways in which to compliment such an amazing story and fatastic chapter, but unlike SOME beautimus people, I am not an Engil Lit major...XD

As it tis, you'll just have to be happy with the above comments, some girlish shreiking, and a very heatfelt glomp.

*girlish shreiking*

*run, jump, GLOMP!*
person andalitebandit-6
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was HALF right! It WAS a security mechanism! But how does Zim hope to save Dib if he kills the only scientists in the universe that know how to deactivate the security feature? Sure, he said he wouldn't talk, but aren't there ways around that? Truth syrums, memory extraction devices, etc? What happened to all that superior irken technology? Oh, well...ZIM SAVE THE DIB!!!
person Sylver
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH! do we get torture scenes now???? pwease?? (im sadistic arent i?)

that bloody vortian better talk, or I"LL GO AFTER IT!!

hehe *cough*
person Insanity
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you got these chapters up quick. Loved them both. It's hard to figure out who I feel worse for. I mean sure Dib is going through all of this stuff that the Vortians implanted in him, but at the same time Zim is going through the emotional stress of caring about Dib's condition, not to mention worrying about the Tallest situation.

Whatever the outcome of it all, i'm sure i'll enjoy it :)
person Kuragari Okami
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Super LURV!!! Thank you! thank you! thank you!!!! *runs around in cicles bouncing up and down* HAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!

*cough* I'm fine....LOVE!!!! >^.^<;
person Kuragari Okami
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* It keeps getting worse for Dib!! Don't kill him!!! Just when they got back together! WAHHHHH!!! *cries on keyboard*

TT_TT

<3
person Ryu Forte
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sniffle* Poor Dib...I don't want his head to explode...only gir is alowed to do that...wait...whatever happened to him anyway? Can't wait for the next update!