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by Florville

person chatnia
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Dib is saved! My head is pleased.

You're such an awesome writer! It's like you never lose interest in your ideas like I do. I start writing a fic, but lose my motivation halfway through. I suppose this is a great inspiration! *plots*
person Krimzon
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Dib lives!! YAY!!!

But my, that procedure for making Red and Purple shorter sounded Unpleasant. Owchie... But that does seem to be the only option, doesn't it? I hope not... But at the same time, I hope it's excruciating and very detailed. I don't know what's wrong with me....

Oh? And what's this? A new character addition? Who is it, I wonder...hmmmmmm. I have me theories, but I think I'll keep them to meself....TAK!!..

Damnit! So much for being all secretive and sturf. I love how Dib fell asleep just as they were starting to get it on. So cute and funny and just plain great.

Heh. I sooooooo want to say many a thing to make you bush some more, but this time I will be quiet. SEE?? This is me being quiet!
person SomekindofFreak
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this! I cant think of any better way to put it. You are an incredibly talented writer. Oh, and im glad there are other people who use the word "lurve" lol. I was scared u werent going to continue writing this and i flipped out, but then i found the taquitos chapter today and i squealed lyk the obsessive ZADR/Yaoi fangirl I am.
Please continue so i dont freak out again! ^^
person Ryu Forte
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEE!!!! *Huggles* I lurved ed her! Thank you so much! I can die happy now, my life is complete! XD Great chapter! Yay for sleepy Dibbers!
person Reyku Sama
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t! Gir came through for us! And Dibs right, Zim has grown and matured since the beginning! ^^ Ohh Ohh, I wonder who it is on that planet! Could it be Tak? Or maybe Skooge? Can't wait for the next chapter!
person GothycCoalChambr (not signed in)
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, i reviewed this fic too! hopefully i'll be able to keep up with your updates now, since everything is straightened out here. anyways, glad to be able to read and review once again! *LURVE* keep up the good work my Tallest! *salutes*
person Insanity
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been absent for far too long from this story, but I come back and see there's so much going on in the story which makes me so happy. So much tension, emotion, and above all a bit of angst(my favorite part).

Zim and Dib have come so far together and to see Zim so open finally is a very nice treat. A very big step up from treating Dib as a mere slave. It's definatly believable that they love each other.
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! finally updates! ive been following this story for a few days now (damn i went through this fast!) and even though i really, really like it i just haven't bothered reviewing until now for the simple reason that im lazy.
but now i am.
i love this story. i think its the best invader zim story here and the only one i really like!
i was just wandring though, what happened to the ruthless and slighly insane Dib that murdered his family, betrayed his race and took part in the downfall of the irken monarchy? I miss him! since the start of this story he's always gotten really mushy around zim but it just seems that since the whole kidnapping he become a real pussy.
does anyone know what Dib is short for? im just wandering.
person andalitebandit-6
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, surgery? Well, even if it solves the height problem, the former Tallests probably still won't be too happy with the arangement. So what? Keep them in prison forever? Yay for minor lemon scented bathing scene! X3 Aww, Dib's still tuckered out. I'm sure he'll be up to par soon though, right? And what's so special about this new irken that Zim's interested in? Update soonish!
person Kharn
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh phew! It's all over... Dib fell asleep, that was so funny!
I liked that Dib was concearned for Lokis. Great chapter.