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person Meee
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, I loves Tak! <3 Actually, even though this story is so great, I'm finding myself leaning more towards ZATR than ZADR now... *hides from angry ZADR fans*
person wouldn\'t-u-like-2-no
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kill red and spare purple...i gotta say, that was bloody clever it was. i really saw the maturity that Dib was talking about...hm...dib?dib? Dimetri? Maybe...
just a thought, but puelw is awfully soft and may have trouble finding a place in irken life, so maybe he can be dibs personal servant of somthin'. just a thought.
the scene with tak was certinly amusing.
i could go on praising u and ur fic and all that but i think both my opinions and gratitude can be summed up in one sentance:

YAY FOR BADASS DIB!!!

the Tellest's mate really should be have a mean streak. heh, i actually got this image in y head of dib presenting zim with the heart/head or other remains of some enemy(possibly Red. dibs always wanted to kill an alien, im sure he'd jump at the chace t kill a leader. strangly enough that was how they were gonna end the series before it got canceled.) and God help me its really cute. i mean really, really cute! dib would die & kill for zim. Awww!...

ok im done.

UPDATE!
person red dragon
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the more u go the better u get i don't remeber who said "life is like a fine wine it gets better with age" but who ever said it was definatly thinking of this story as before and always an exsquisid piece of work well worth a grammy if they had a net story catagorie

so " let's do the time warp again"

lurve alway
Red Dragon
person vilmary
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I want a front row seat too, you know! *snerk* Im gonna sneak in with Tak
person InvaderMonkey
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wonder wut zim has in in for tak? and sometimes i think red is the bigger idiot of the 2.....-_- or more stubborn! srry i haven't reviewed in a while..i haven't had internet in a month ijust got it bak!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!
person SomekindofFreak
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im happy to hear you wont stop writing ^^ Yay! I'm lurved! Thank you so much for the chapter dedication!!! - such a nice chapter too w/ the Red and Pur conflict...is Zim gonna kill Red? I MUST KNOW! >.<
Oh yeah, and dont worry, I wont tell anyone. lol.
person andalitebandit-6
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TAK!? Front row seat? What's this about? I was getting kinda worried there for a second when Zim started cornering her like that... Maybe I should still be? Oo;
person Sylver
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chap was interesting... Red seems like such a bastard, i can understand not wanting to see you empire falling into the hands of someone you dislike, but trying to hit pur?? now thats too far...

smite him when you like ^_^

Pur was just cute in this one "that non-deathy thing" *cuddles pur* lol

the tak intro i didnt really see coming though.. and didnt she get blasted off into space? hrrmm.. did she just happen to land on planet DIRT again? (that would have been horrible)

i feel like sitting on my hands and waiting for the next chap, I wanna know what Taks doing there! and sitting on my hands is bad. I've been neglecting my own fic (eep)
person EscagirlUK
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I've always wondered... But is Ms Bitters an Irken, because she acts, looks, and kinda sounds like one. Yanno? ::coughs:: Anyways. Yay, Purple! Boo, Red! Zimmy, kick Tak's green behind! Subjugate the evil one!
person chatnia
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! TAK! I was hoping she'd show up sooner or later. She's one of my favorites. *curious to see what happens* o.o