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person SomekindofFreak
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice comeback chapter XD I love possesive Zim! O.O
Mooore...possesive "MINE"-ness!!! XP
Oh, and I began reading Seeing Red the few days there were no updates. Its very good too...i think ill review it...?
person BurningSilence
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well! Zim and Dib were sure...enthusiastic! (Oddly enough, I happened to be listening to S+M: A Love Song--by KidneyTheives. It went along *really* well while I was reading this chapter...) But other than that, I'm really anxious to see what happens with Red...and why would he try to hit Purple? Although, I guess under stress and pressure...hmmm...Oh the ANGST! ^_^;; Ugh, I hate the short reviews I've been leaving...but I really like this story, and it kills me I can't think of anything else to say! >_< Maybe when I'm feeling better I'll have more worthwhile things to say, ne? ^_^

BurningSilence
person vilmary
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...But I wanted the muffins... oh well. Still, good lord:((Dib shook his head. “Zim…let me just put it this way: when sex is good,” he grinned stupidly, “I mean, really good, getting banged up a little isn’t so bad.”)) True-er words have been barely spoken. t bad that people would find it amusing to argue in your revews, Im so sorry. Well... DELICIOUS WEENIE!!
person Tamagoakura
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe... O.o That was AWSOME! I'm gonna be grinning like a fool for te rest of the day! ^_^
person Ryu Forte
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And again, your very welcome! I love this chapter! I really hope you don't plan o killing Purple during the operation...He's my favorite Tallest next to Zim...Oo; Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Reyku Sama
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This must be one of your best chapters yet! It's quite interesting what you did about the connectors, it's very orriginal. Yes, what will become of Tak and Purple? And will Red still meet his demise at Zim's hand? I'll be waiting for your next update!
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Great chapter! ^_^
person Sylver
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn... just damn.. we need more of that!! argh!! *fans self*

i had never considered the use of bething gel as lube though. lol, in my haste to get to the smut i skipped the part where they got in the bath, and im reading it and im all "what tub? when did they get in the tub? *scrolls up* oh!"

i'm hoping to get the next chap from Shini soon, I got one of my friends to give it a quick beta while shes busy, and i got a simple "no better than what i could do" -_- not asking him to beta my work again...

and dont be sad! if I get a free moment sometime soon it should be up soonish!!

*lurve*
person Chess 77
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Dib lives! I always liked Purple, he's cute in a stupid kinda way so I'm glad he's (seemingly!) going to live. I love this story sooo much, especially evil/sadistic Zim. Can't wait for an update and thank you for dedicating a chapter to me ^-^
person Switch
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tak IS cool I always had a thing for Tak. sure shes full of vengence and such but its alright when its well placed. Trust me I would know I extract vengence on a regualr basis. *huggles* thatnks for more good stuff