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by Florville

person EscagirlUK
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor, Dibby-wibby. There, there. ::pats on head:: Don't worry, Zim shall smite the human race with his smitefull fist of smitefullnes! They shall be smote as never before smoten! Zim and you shall go down in the Anus of history!
person Kharn
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The time has come... Prepare for the revolution... Long live the Tallest and Florville!
person Insanity
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See me amaze you with my dissapearing and reappering abilities *does weird things with her hands for a few moments before stopping*

Yes...well. At any rate, it was nice to see Zim show some form of compassion towards Purple nearing the process. Of course when you're that loyal to someone your whole life than I guess you can't help but feel some form of remorse. As for Red, the jerk got what was coming to him.

Onto more previous things though. I love how easily Dib shows emotions in this story. He's not one to bottle things up and it definatly shows. The end of the chapter just had me grinning though, because I actually do picture Dib getting some sort of sick and twisted revenge on his own race, and to have Zim say Earth would be the first to go and Dib accept it...just seems right. I always wanted Dib to just tell everyone to fuck off while watching the show...was that just me? No...yes...maybe?

Anyway, I'll try to review more from now on. I've just been doing a ZADR RP with a friend and it has me not focusing on other things. Oh how my mind wanders :)
person GothycCoalChambr (not signed in)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back to review again, hooray for me. Dib is rather sadistic, isn't he? But he does seem like the type to be like that. So 10 days until they reach Irk, can't wait for that. Um well, I don't really have anything else to say. I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter my Tallest. *LURVE*
person InvaderMonkey
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! poor dib if i was being watched like that for 2 hours while i was talking to myself! i would be sooo embarrassed! lol and i so understand dib to think the irken's thought tha everyone was like dib AHAHAHAHAHA! the human race is to incompetint! nice chapter poor zimmy! i thought the tallest ( red and pur) thru skoodge to the sun? becuase he was so short AND UGLY! no offense to skoodge but that's wut they said! ^^
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im surprised by how well the irks are taking the fact that not only is a non-breeder former invader now tallest having sex, but he's doing it with a human! as in not an irken. doesn't anyone have a problem with that? like red, or tak, or something?
i mean its been done before im sure, though surprisingly not in a IZ fic, i guess everyone just assumes that as an invader race they've cross breed more then a few times. but anyway i know its really soapy but no ones even mentioned the fact that the tallest has chosen a human for a...mate?
whatever. your fic and you doin' good.
Lee is a character from a anime series on Cartoon network called Naruto, which is the name of the main character. i myself love it and think that Gaara/Lee is afantastic pairing and all who appose shall be flogged until they learn to except love between anime characters even when their not both/ or either of them are bishies. Gaara isn't really a bishi. more like a dark bishi if ya ask me. Neji, Haku, Itachi, they're all bishis. but not Gaara.
Meanwhile back to the review!
U rock.
The fic rocks.
Rock Lee Rocks.
Dib rocks! (still doesn't have a real name)
and Zim rules them all under the power of the control brain whci will hence forth be known as Jhonen.
i dont think ive ever written so much in a review to this story...Oh well! im in pain so im acting weird.
i leave you to your moosy fate!
person wouldn\'t-u-like-2-no
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JV is god and you are an angel. or more lieky he's the devil and your his demon of seductive FF. Eith r ones good, whatever floats your boat.
I like this side of Dib to Zim.
Sex is good. Pardon, sex is REALY good.
I completely forgot about the Armada. i had assumed they would follow Zim as the others had. Good for you. the plot thickens!
update soon lease. your doing really well.
person dramaelf
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back :) papers papers papers all last week long. fun last two chapter truth hurts, cute lol
person Sylver
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooohh, workholes. I like wormholes (i swear it was Farscape that got me hooked on wormholes)
but whats gonna happen to red?? i like the fact that purples all good, but what about stubborn little red??

the whole lockdown thing is rattling around my mind right now, I can see why Zim would want in place but for those Irkens who dont know about Zim being the new tallest, wouldn't they think that something has gone horribly wrong? or is that the idea??
person One-Eyed Jester
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally understand your labor of love. As an artist i can realate in complete... completeness? (there goes all my eloquancy lol) I can tell that you trule love writing this fic. So many original developments have taken place with such a flow that if it hade bekome irksome or irritating you would have killed it long ago. In any event i'm really glad you didn't. There are so many scenes that just made me go wow and re read them over and over because they were so perfect. Like the scene where the entire crew of the Massive salutes zim and he's just completely floored by the loyalty. And the scene where gir is supposed to translate the irken codes int archaic runes was so precious because he switches back and forth between the red and turquoise eyes. it makes him almost... sentient. Like gir evolved from being an android and is actually alive and can make serious choices for himself that arn't completely random spaz phases. Ironic that in the cartoon GIR was supposed to be a practical joke on Zim and ended up having emotions and compassion where all the SIRs were mindless drones isn't it?

Also, because i got carried away with my thoughts, i forgot to say something.
THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU ARE LOOOOOOVE!!!!
I can't believe you dedicated a chapter to me! I feel special and lurved. *happy dance* ^.^ And i'm a reccord holder? wowsies. I feel really happy... ^.^
<3 <3 <3

PS: Freud was a perv... and so was shakespear... but then, you look at the worlds greates abstract artist of all time and after a while you notice that almost all of his pictures have either a vagaina or a penis in them... if not both. I think he holds the pervy reccord for being a dirty old man. I speak of course of Pablo Picasso. lol