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for VINDICATION

by Florville

person wouldn't-u-like-2-no
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...i cant be left out of this! since everyone is nameing their common smyptoms(sp sucks)

I'm:

I. ADD

II. Hyperactive

III. Bipolar

IV. Schizotechnical

my spelling sucko! really isnt a big deal. sometimes its eveen fun. inappropraite but still fun.
person Evol
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please pleasepleaspleasepleasePLEASE! Continue!...please...
have you read johnny the homicidail maniac? did you like it?
person SilentSniper
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate my computer, it made me miss updates that would make me happy. I must say that your writing is one of the bests. You explain it so well...Dib character grew up immensely here and he seems so...gah, I can't find words for it that would suit it. I am in awe. I love Zim's possessiveness, the long chapters and the smut. Can't forget about the smuts...and updates!
person Night Shade
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry for not reviewing b4, but i just couldnt stop long enough to review! It took me two nights but i read your fic, and i've decided it's one of my all time favorites!!!
I can't wait for your next update!

Your loyal reader, Night Shade
person Invader Spork
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your Tallest hasn't forgotten about you. I've been busy doing.. Stuff.
Awesome story, keep on updating or face my wrath. ^_^ The sheer number of chapters you've written is mind-blowing. Good job, soldier.
person Kuragari Okami
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! NEW Chappietier!!!*sigh* I love the way you write! mer....MORE!! heheheeeee....>^.^<
person 77Jhonen
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you and all your mighty mighieness!!!!!!! You write too damn well!!!!!!!! But I love this story!!!
person uupaaaaiiit
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! I dont write english very well, you know. But your work in this fan fiction is...AMAZING!!! I love the idea to made a doujinshi of some chapters....if only I could have more time....but soon you`ll see in my Deviant some random art of Vindication... Take care.

Hugs n Kisses

Uupaaaaiiit.
person Switch
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was bad... drunken chilren are NOT something i prefer to deal with on a regualr basis... but if they dont fuck up at least once really badly then they just do it agian and never learn. good chapter BTW that sudden mood change fits Dib so well. i mean its just so human... i love that. great stuff... *huggles* thanks hun
person Ryu Forte
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, ok, when you put everything like that, all the pieces come together. And I am beginning to like the way Dib acts more and more. I have a tendency to hate people as well, after being patronized for nearly 13 years of my 17 year life. Up untill 3 years ago, I was teased, ridiculed and plain out attacked by nearly everyone but a teacher or to. Said I had 'ADD' and I was causing trouble for the teachers by complaining about being teased and tourtured, no one cared. I have limited friends, and most also hate everybody else, and/or are Anachists, which is just fine by me...And I'm just rambling on about nothing...

Another great chapter, I liked Dib's little outburst there at the end, and I also like how they is gonna destroy earth when Zim is ordained. >:) Down with the stupid Pig smellies who are gonna get what they deserve! *Shakes fist*