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by Florville

person Tamagoakura
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
True, true. I forgot about the human shitty-ness part... O.o

Anyhow, lmao, I'm rolling in happy land! XD That was some awsome S&M smut stuff! This could do with more, really. ^_^ lol, fiendish glee... ^_^ That's just awsome. Also, Dib-slut! XD XD XD rotfl, that was so freakin' funny! I'll be dancing about this for days! ^_^
person Invader spork
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh...My brain doesn't work like it did six or seven years ago....Hah! But sadly no fanart yet.....*glares at her mom* Very good story, I have missed it! *hands you a coookie and a wine cooler*

-<3 CHU!
person Tallest Spork
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn your story has taken, and here I was thinking the dom/sub bit in the beginning would be just that and nothing more. Very good work soldier, you have pleased your Tallest.
person Ryu Forte
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee! I have to admit, this is your best chapter yet! Haha, Dib enjoys being tourtured, what a nut. (No pun intended...X3) Ah yes, the wrath of Zim must truley be feared, but how long untill Dib forgets again. XD Update again! I love it when you update! X3
person Reyku Sama
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You always make the sex scenes so very good! Mmm, so nice, I was waiting for that since you posted your last chapter. Such a pervert am I. Very well written, I'll be waiting for your next update! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING!!!!! So very awsome!

Thats quite interesting about coffee, I never knew that. I'll have to pass that on to my friends.
person Judas Priest
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG Your such a good writer! I am so addicted to your stories! boyxboy is fo friggin sexy! Some chapter like these I love to read more than once because they're that good! I bow to thee! I e not earthy way! I e not earthy way! *Bows at your feet* I am a loyal servent to you, my allmighty tallest Florville!

Oh, and um...I probably sound really stupid asking this, but...what are you talking about when you mention Dib's 'spot'? Does something like thatreally exist, or did you just make it up? Sorry, it's been bothering me a little bit...
person Tensei
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just spent over 5 hours reading this masterpiece......one would think that after 70 chapters, the story would get a little bland and yet somehow, you have kept that from happening. I can easily see massive character development in both Zim and Dib, as well as among the other minor characters. You have exception skill as an author, and would love to see this continue.

person dramaelf
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yes Goosebumps was originally gooseflesh in referents to how the flesh of a goose looks after plucking the feathers from the birds body it had little bumps (feather floccules) all over it like us were are hair floccules are.
person Forgotten Soul
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I've had a rough time with illness and family issues and the like. Anyway I enjoyed both chapters greatly. Zim should punish Dib more often! >D I love love LOVE this story! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
person Switch
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm Kinkyness... tis tasty *giggles and hugs* glad you came back to us.