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wow. i like the story. put up the next chapter soon.

Yikes!! This was awsome!!

More Chapters?? Please?

PS: Check out my stuff on this site... love to know your veiw.

Later,
JD

good! continue

Suspense suspense! A rave in a corn field, it would appear we're in Kansas now :D I liked this newest installment, even though I always hate hanging a scene at the end of a chapter like that, but it does wonders when its someone else doing it and me reading it! Hardly a single mistake that I could find, and enjoyed the bit about Alex.

Good insight into Mandy's character, I watched the show but not really enough to be able to come up with parents' names and so forth like that. Yes Alex is an ass kicker at soccer, there were a few of her type I knew back in high school just two years ago, its good reading that stuff. Chapter two's soccer match with the emphasis on Alex was enjoyable, and it actually made reading about a miserable Mandy more enjoyable. Mandy, clover, and a strap-on... lots of fun right there. Who will they target next? Either of the other two, or in chapter five will they come across Mandy's brother assuming he didn't actaully die? Please do write the next chapter sooner than later, "I demand satisfaction!" Baron Harkonnen "Dune"

YESSSSSSS!!! Finally someone did this who wasn't me.

Update soon. I hope you haven't discontinued this story. I'm really looking forward to your update! I wanna know who Mandy is gonna end up!

Awwww this is such a sweet story, dark but sweet. To say I like it alot is a gross understatement. Please please please finish it...