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for Desires Unleashed

by Jamest40

schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write more on this story? I would really like to see how you continue this story!! Its really good!!
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
write the fourth chapter
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trust Blossom to go and invent her own sex toys - just how long were they in the Professor's lab for anyway, while Blossom researched the affliction and built those devices?
I'm not surprised Bubbles was curious - she could see her sisters were enjoying themselves, and it didn't look harmful, and usually they do everything together. :D But, given that, why did they need the handcuffs, when they could have probably just persuaded her to join in of her own free will (and once they got going, the affliction would spread to her anyway).
So, what next for our favourite little superheroes? ;D
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brill opening chapters, James! I agree, for your first lemon, this is bloody good! :D :D I take it the next chapter will be Blossom (and Buttercup too, maybe?) bringing Bubbles in on the fun...? ;D
I'm gonna start writing mine tomorrow, hopefully (if I can get myself inspired, LOL)
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schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! This stuff has pretty good content! i'm amazed that you can write so well, during your first adult fic. Keep it up! And if you excuse me...heh