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for Totally Captive

by Talonrv

person mickey
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good. please write more quick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person johnny boy
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and write more its really good
person superboy
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good mystery. i would like to know what happens so please write more fast. i can't wait
person Red Phoenix
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is VERY GOOD. As well as a pleasurable side there is also mystery and a pretty good storyline. I am looking forward to seeing sam in a bondage scene - should be a laugh.
person DrAgoN
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jerry is spelled with J not G, but i don't really care as long as you write more.
person CBMC
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quote: His name's spelled with a J not a G.

I didn't read this story, but since such an ass, I'll point out this is an unintentional reference to the rapper Kurious.
person Infinite Leviathan
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! DO MORE! DO MORE! Pleasseee...no one else is adding new stories except for me and this one your doing.
person Dark Wolf
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Please continue! His name's spelled with a J not a G.
person Psychedelic Leviathan
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Start with the pornographic parts please. I know you can do it. And put Mandy in too, she needs a good lession in humility and what better way to get that then through forced bondage?

It's J-erry actually.