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for Totally Captive

by Talonrv

schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Maybe when it's Sam's turn as she struggles to say no one should like bondage it's plain wrong but when Alex punishes her by spanking Sam starts to finally feel good and starts being obedient
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More I love this
person bimorgan
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good so far but the show must go on with at least one more chapter please
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finish this story man. i got to see how it ends. i mean you haven't even got to the good stuff yet!
person Kay
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more, this sounds really intresting.
person Lucas
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story but your letting it drag out get to the bondage and domination already
person Prophecy
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read what happens next.Plz Update Soon
person LuluCat
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must write more! You can't just leave us hanging like that!
person Dark Novei
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is getting good.
person twitch
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice story please keep going please