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for Let's Do It Again

by Doug4422

person Horatius
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story. Finish it. You're doing an excellent job. If you don't finish, you're doing a huge disservice to your fans. Your pacing has improved greatly. Your story is an incredible work. All you need to do now is get it on TV. Keep up the good work.
person Anulmentor
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yea man great work, i hope you will continue your geat work and there will be many more chapters or sequels. i will read them all
person bubbles
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleese hurry up and finish the story, i need to know what he does with kim
person Eraz
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I like the first story can't wait for what what happens next.
person bubbles
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damm! this is getting good.
person Eraz
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again you did it love the chapter can't wait for the next one
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read up to Part 5 Damn that was intense so far Way to go Ronnie!
person charizardag
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn man, where did you get these ideas? keep it up
person Racella
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!
U UPDATE FAST!!!!!!!!!
YOU NO STOP WRITEING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ME LIKE STORY LOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Racella
person charizardag
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in other KP sex stories, Kim liked Ron nibbling on her ear, it sent her on a high. but whatever, it's still good
but ron's first time was with Zita? or did I mis-read it?