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I like stories where Ron takes on the cheer squad, especially Hope and Marcella. Keep 'em coming, Doug, AND I do mean it that way!

I liked bothe of your storys ceap up the good work.

I hope you don't mind this, but I'm using this space as a complete review, over "Happy Birthday Ron" and this story, "Let's Do It Again". And I have to say, this was one of the most intense Ron/Kim and everyone else stories I've ever read. This was way better than the very few others that try to do what you did with a Ron free-for-all, and the only one in my book that succeeded in doing so. Plus, I have to admit, some of your own commentary was right, the first did seem a little rushed, especially when I began to read this continuation. I'm glad you took whoever's suggestion it was to take it more slowly and give each of the girls their own chapter, not to mention the threesome at the end. Really, keep up the great job you do in writing such incredble stories, not just here, but on FF.Net. I can't wait to see what else you got in store for all of us readers in the coming future, it should be a wild ride.

P.S. I gotta add this, but have you ever thought of writing a beginning story, you know, how things started out, except making it for ONLY Kim and Ron. In your first one, Kim and Ron were already active, with Kim bragging and making Ron's fantasy come true. But how about a prequal, that begins their own sexual experiences together, how it all got really started, so to speak. What do you think?

HI loved it it rocked but what mad you come up with the idea of the story in the first place I would like to know that is all And I was planning on writing my story soon and I was wondering if I sould do the similer thing for my story because I loved how it worked for you that is so cool

my name is ryan And love and peace to you and all on my scale from 1 to 10 it is a 20 it is that good

Even better than the first!

Rock on, man, and keep the stories coming!!!

One of the best stories I've read on this site so far.... Will there be a part 3 to this?

Back again.... I think that you should add one more girl to the fray... Yori.... just a suggestion.

I read the first one, and liked it. This second one though, WOW. That's the sorta story movies are made of. Keep up the good work, and most of all, have a wild time with it

Hi there! Name is JuPMod, and I'm a writer/reader of KP fanfic over at Fanfictionnet. Out of curiosity, I came for the first time today to AdultFanficitonnet to read any good adult KP fanfic.

I have to say that out of the 50 or less KP fanfics, your two stories are the tops. I certainly enjoyed reading Ron getting on with almost every member of the cheer squad (sans two members you didn't included), Monique, and Shego. Quite an erotic KP stories, and well written! I certainly can see Kim allowing this if she's kinky enough to do it! :D

Are you going to write anymore? I think maybe you can write up a third story that includes the other two members of the squad you didn't mentioned - the other redhead and the fluffy brown hair/skin girl. Given they are members of the squad, they are bound to find out what the other members had done with Ron and would perhaps feel left out.

Anyway, you're a good adult KP fanfic writer. Good job with your two stories. :)

This is not a complement I find myself giving very often, but...damn. You know how write like nobody's business. This story and its prequal are incredibly well-written, perfect in a storytelling sense. Call it what you want, rhythm, flow, whatever, you have it. Whatever else is in a story, if it can manage that, then it's good.