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fucking brilliant. dam that was good. because of you i live up to my name.

as a joke in your next one mention a female naked mole rat

Good lord, ths was possibly the best thing I've ever read. Truly you have a god given gift at this, I hope to see ore of your work in the future.

great story really loved reading it. i do have one suggestion, you might want to consider goiing into more details about your characters. I know that anyone who has watched the show would know what they look like. but its still a good idea to try to elaborate on it especcially since we are seeing them in a way we have never seen them before.

Are you gonna make a sequel? that would be cool if you did. make a sequel

An excellent story. I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter, should you decide to do it. Ron and Shego could be fun, but having Kim 'close at hand' might be interesting. The only review bits of advice I can offer are these: Slow down. YOu've got all the bandwidth you need to tell a story. Take the time to describe the differences in the girls. No two women are alike, ever. You have them all as pretty much carbon copies, just wearing different clothes. They shouldn't look, smell, sound or even feel the same. Not all women make noise at the moment of orgasm; some of them are very quiet until you feel their muscles go rigid. Describe that. In my opinion, that would REALLY add to the story. Secondly, variety.Different people like different things. Not all women enjoy sex in the same way. Add some variety to the mix. Personally, I could see Bonnie perferring things from behind, either on all fours or grabbing a suitable piece of furniture. At a future date, some of the ladies might enjoy being part of a 'Ron Sandwich'. Variety, thats the key.
Besides those two suggestions, you have a whole lot of potential. Keep it up! And hurry up with that next chapter.

I only hope you do a sequal to this one, great work

Wow, Ron must be tired after the first four! and once Kim has her turn, won't the others be geared up for round 2? Why not have them all at once for a grand finally! Well its your choise, your story so I won't keep you! Keep going, can't wait for the others to fowfill Rons secret desires! Later :)

Damn man, Chapter three was the bomb literally!
I am humbled by Ron's Chiviallry and gentleness as well as his deication to give someone an out!

Good man ron, damn good

I look forward to more on this, It has my seal of approval in the way it's shaping up!
Hey capcomfreakforlife, get your ass here and read this , it's bloody teriffic!

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! IT CAN'T BE OVER!!!!!!!!!
*Whine* I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH SHEGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

man that is so naughty. i wish i would get lucky like that pleease update soon