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December 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmph, if I were Ron, I'd have used my hands and mouth to bring Kim off at least once for every girl that preceded her, especially considering how he'd said Kim was going to 'get it'.
And really, that's the only gripe I have about this, aside from each session going so quickly. A good oral work up is always good.
And really, that's the only gripe I have about this, aside from each session going so quickly. A good oral work up is always good.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great story with only one major hiccup: You have GOT to use something besides commas; seriously, comma splices run rampant here. Use a period, for Kim's sake. It's that little dot next to the comma. That's what it's there for, to end sentences.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE YOU ROCK!!! This is defineitly 'book' style porno mat. Have a good day dude!! :o)
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ggggooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddd ddddddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowza...
That was awesome.
keep writing! I love the descriptions, although next time maybe there could be less girls or more detail for each one. I would be opposed to seeing some different positions used, either. Just a suggestion, though. Keep up the excellent work!!! :)
That was awesome.
keep writing! I love the descriptions, although next time maybe there could be less girls or more detail for each one. I would be opposed to seeing some different positions used, either. Just a suggestion, though. Keep up the excellent work!!! :)
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story... keep it up!!!! Best story I've read so far on this site.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! THAT WAS AWSOME!!! WRITE MORE!!!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS THE BEST LEMON I HAVE EVER READ MY EYES ARE WELDING UP TEARS BECAUSE OF THAT STORY I MEAN WOW DAMN IF YOU HAVE ANYMORE THEN DAMN DAMN IM READING THEM
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell?! Since when is Ron popular with the ladies?! (At *all*, let alone so much that they'd all want to sleep with him?...!)
Oh, and incidentally, you're supposed to end sentences that are in quotations with commas, and sentences that are on their own with periods - not the other way around.
Oh, and incidentally, you're supposed to end sentences that are in quotations with commas, and sentences that are on their own with periods - not the other way around.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who knew you were into writing lemons.
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