rate_review Reviews

heh pretty good next time though make it longer and add Trixie and Veronica

Great! If you are reading this, me want more!

yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

yet another thing that (Hopfuly) can ever happen!
reeely freaky though!:)

you,you,you fuckin rock yeah!!!!!!!!!

I seriously never get tired of reading this story. It's my favorite one on the whole site!!!I love it!!You are an awesome writer!!!

good

HOLLY MUTHU F'R THIS IS A GOOD F.O.P. STORY PURE SMUT WITCH IS GOOD.
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Nice punning dude. But I just thought I would get to the part we all want to read for a change. I know I usually have SOME plot, or something like one, but I was tired. But thanks for the memo. I'll spank out some more monkeys for you to read about. ;)

I take it from the descriptions of Vicky and Tootie that this is about five to seven years from now...when Timmy finds himself "sexually awakened", and enlists Cosmo and Wanda's help in achieving his..er, "peak performance"...naturally, with their help, he can "have" any girl he wants---and more. Long sentence, isn't it? I realize you wanted to get to the "meatier" part first, but you've practically...shall I say it?...."jerked" us into the middle of his most satisfactory..."climax"....without telling us HOW this came to be. Look, I enjoy reading about Timmy "getting it on" as much as the next person, but how about a more complete story surrounding this delighful..."interlude"? It couldn't be THAT...."hard". ;)