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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the double post; I forgot to ask you if it was alright with you if I continued to write my own story. I would hate to be accused of stealing someone's idea.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised at the quality. This story is believable and entertaining. The characters are actually kept in character throughout the story, which, overall, ehances it greatly. Just one question, will there be more?
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite good. I enjoyed the interplay of the characters before the lemon bits (which I mostly skipped over). I'm not sure what the purpose was for the 3-years on the island bit; it seemed like the most interesting plot development happened within, as Shego points out, the 6 month period. Similarly, giving them television reception blurs the ending where lots of things have gone on. Minor details, which is a testament to how well the story overall stood up.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very nice story, and I would like to know what happens afterwards. And also what happened with Drakken, Ron, and the others while Kim and Shego were lost.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! but how could u end it? i wanna c kim's parents reactions :) plz plz plz make a sequel
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed you fic you write a really good story. You really kept up with the line and didnt jump around. Maybe you could do a story on what happend to Ron and Monique?
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so very good to bad it was so short. really something intesrting had to happen, they were to lovers alone on an island for over two years. but hopefully this will turn into more than a one shot there is just so much potential. you really are a good writer.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a verry good story. You have put a lot of thought and heart into it. Isa a good read, and the part with Ron the monkey was sad, I to know of taking in a sick baby animal and nursing it back to healt so I could realy relate to it, tho it suked that it died. Anyway love the story, good work! Later :)
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey man serious woops for you dude. That rocked majorly. Read something similar in the Buffy fandom but all the same good stuff!! And yeah I'd have to admit it I would love to be stuck on an island with them!! But if we get to specifics it must be shego!! I don't know what it is but god damn!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this story. My only real complaint is that it's so short. I'm hoping that that's because this is merely the set up for an entire series. I think you've got the beginnings of a great universe and I'd love to see what happens next.