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by Daishi

person Louche
schedule April 7, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I'm sure there's little point to reviewing this over 15 years later but I thought this was really good and wish it had continued. The details are what make it great.

person D4rK
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope u bore more often make more now!!
person toamon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good. but get some real sex in it, ya know, pussy pounding, but not rape
person Unknown26
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY nice! One of the best one's on here! Need....more...my...*precious*
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad. some details are unessessary in certain areas, like the loading computer thing and the stradavarius staircase!. some of the details you give are far too technical, like your getting it out of a textbook or something. the sex portion just seems to lack something... i think the word i'm looking for is, feeling.
but it is good for a first time. you have some good potential.