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Not to be rude but, shouldn't Sokka and Aang have heard Katara's scream?

I thuroughly enjoy this story! I hope that you continue to post and bring the rich plot that you have created already into future chapters.

THANKS A LOT

ROSSIETTE

Ha! Sokka was so perfect!!! I addored this chapter. ^-^

humm... chalenges you ask for???

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Is trying to be creative....

Is failling at creativity this early in the morning, especially after an apocalyptic nightmare...

Thankfully there are great AtLA fanfictions like this one on the web to help me forget said nightmares!

Thanks for the story! I'm a big fan of Cold Fire and am really enjoying Hot watter as well ;)

Katara's gonna have a girl, isn't she?

I'm glad Katara and Iroh get along^-^This was a very nice chapter, but I think you made Sokka a lil' ooc. I mean, I know he's annoying when it comes to food, but he gave me a headache in this chapter-_-;;

Very good so far! Doode, the mark thing was cool and thank you for making him sweet towards her! Even if he is still a bastard. ^.^ Hee! I love Sokka! That was classic. Keep writing por favor!
~Valkyrie

I read Cold Water and enjoyed it a lot, I'm glad you were so forthcoming with the sequel. I think my favorite bit in both stories is how well you capture the softer side of Zuko and how he is with Katara. It feels like you really get through all the layers of both characters and they connect beautifully. I have to say though, not that I don't love the wonderfully paternal Iroh, but the dialogue for chapter three felt a little awkward. You might want to read it out loud before you upload it, to see if it sounds right to you. As for your challenge, I would love to see an Aang/Katara fic by you. I haven't found a single one so far anywhere, and I'm sure you'd do an awesome job.

Woah, This story is so good. The plot is brilliant and I love how Zuko has that soft spot. Very good. You made Zuko seem very old, but he's well educated so I'll let that slip n.n; Keep going.

Hey, you have alot of spelling errors and a few lines that don't make sense, like one time you made it seem like Zuko was suddenly a girl cause you put "hers" instead of his. but other than that I LOVE IT!!!! my friend DF will kill me if she figures out i said that, she is soooo against Katara and Zuko keep up the good work!

eh heh heh.. yea. i only commented on spelling and grammer and such because i'm hoping to be an author someday ^^''' DON'T HUNT ME DOWN AND KILL ME PLEASE!!!! still luv the story