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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person ShawdiABalla
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It Was Good Keep It Up :)
person P.C.
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, how romantic!XD Such a cute chapter!! Update soon^_^
person aangluva
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u have to write more! I was disappointed that here was only a bit, b/c u usually write more! But it was interesting though! good job!
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I really liked the ending of chapter four. Can't wait to read more. Enjoyed this and Cold Fire. You keep Zuko in character so well unlike some other fics that wussy him up a bit. If you're still working on that challenge here's my suggestion with the two guys you should choose. Jet and Haru. Mainly cause I don't see Zuko as the sharing kind especially after reading your fics. But if you do end up choosing Zuko then I suggest you throw Jet in there with him. Imagine the conflict. Fire Nation hater and the Fire Nation prince. Jet probrably wouldn't like sharing Katara with Zuko. Oh, and please not Aang. Has the boy even reach puberty? I just can't picture it. Well there's my suggestions for you lemon challenge. Can't wait to read more of Hot Water! ^_^
person Mushrambolover
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
c? told u i'd still read it! Rite more plez!
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Cai
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the one before it. I've noticed that in most of the Zuko/Katara fics Zuko becomes basically a little bitch. I really like the fact that he's still himself in this one. So, in the name of all that is good, holy, and perverted: write more. Pwease? With naked, sweaty men on top?
person KinkoOo
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an extremly good chapter. I cant wait until the next chapter, I think i like Uncle Iroh...hes sooo funny.
well about your challenge...i already told you why i wanted it. if thats not good enough then i dont know what is. anyway i love you fic and i also cant wait for the outcome of your 'dare'.....
-kinkoOo
person t3hL3L3
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im gonna hold my breath until you update! *sucks in lotsa air and holds breath*
person Sokka\'s girl
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S OUR FOOD?!?!?!?! ^^ keep up the good work spleefy ^^