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Cool chapter ^^ I'm in suspense for the next one... Keep up the great work ^^

Toataly cool

Another great chapter. The sex was a little too rough for my taste, but it was still good.
Update soon^^

This is not something I expected from Osai. But it shows a lot of promise for a good story...

yay!
you likes my haru/katara/zuko idea!
me iz happyful now!
BUT...
me would be even MORE happyful if youz updated soon!
me wuvs it!

'Say my name, bitch'...I loved that line. Hot sex scene too

cool chapter keep it up

Okay, first of all, Suko saying 'say my name bitch' ,halarious! Don't know why, but when I picture it, it just is. Thank you for writing that. ^^ Second of all, Sokka being a damn bastard! You would think he wouldn't believe the guards and have a whole lot more faith in his own sister. (Grant she is doing Suko but that's beside the point!) He should be thinking Suko's raping her or using her as his plaything! Not thinking she betray her friends. Geeze, wanted to throttle him myself. Can't wait to see what comes next!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Good chapter, as usual, even if Sokka's being a gigantic prick. Katara should have told him he should be grateful it's her that has to sleep with Zuko, in addition to being his prisoner. If other fanfic authors had their way... Anyway, I think you may want to pay a bit more attention to the character's speech- it's getting a little OOC, especially for Katara and Aang. Speaking of those two, in regards to the challenge, I guess you could do a "night before the big battle" one-shot, but I think that's too easy. I'd like to see a post-battle fic, something set after all the hubbub, for lack of a better word. Something peaceful and sweet, or desperate- depending on how you have everything turn out.