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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that yu should make a Katara/kuzo (sp-?) /Haru threesome! Why-? um... becasue Haru did show interest in her and i <3 kuzo. If you are looking for any challenages.. . i may have sum ideas.
1.) - involves fruits
2.) involves things suck as toys, ect.
hoep yu update soon!
1.) - involves fruits
2.) involves things suck as toys, ect.
hoep yu update soon!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were great! It was so sad when Katara got hurt, but I'm glad she's doing better^^ That dream that Zuko had was creepy though>< I liked the part where Katara and Iroh went shopping togetjer. It was cute!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness I've been terrible about reviewing until now and for that I apologize.
However, you have me really distressed with the ending of this last chapter. I've been hoping that somehow/someway Zuko and Katara work together to bring down his father so that Zuko can reclaim his throne and the Aang and her brother could basically go free or something close to that. Was that really Katara's mother coming to warn Zuko, I sincerley hope that she's wrong. Well, you certainly have my attention and I cannot wait until the next chapter. I will say that this is one of my favorite fictions at the moment and one of the best if not the best Avatar fiction out there - but that's just my opinion anyway :P
Again, hope to see more very soon ^_^
However, you have me really distressed with the ending of this last chapter. I've been hoping that somehow/someway Zuko and Katara work together to bring down his father so that Zuko can reclaim his throne and the Aang and her brother could basically go free or something close to that. Was that really Katara's mother coming to warn Zuko, I sincerley hope that she's wrong. Well, you certainly have my attention and I cannot wait until the next chapter. I will say that this is one of my favorite fictions at the moment and one of the best if not the best Avatar fiction out there - but that's just my opinion anyway :P
Again, hope to see more very soon ^_^
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter Spleef! It had touching moments and sad ones, and overall it was a very good chapter. ^^ Keep up the nice work :)
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Katara it was good please continue
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i hope you update soon...i'm about to pee myself
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope Katara will live and things between her and Zuko will be a little better. Please make sure Katara will be okay, I really don't want her to die. I hope your next chapter will be a little happier.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that this has been one of the greatest fanfics that I have ever read. The story is so amazing that I actually breeze past the sex scenes just to get to what will happen next , of caurs I always return to read them later because of the great imagery used. Keep up the great work! -Your loyal and honorable fan
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope Katara will be okay. I hope she'll live and everything will be okay between her and Zuko. I also do hope Aang and the gang will get away safely.