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Well, I have just gotten back from vacation and it was very nice to find a couple of new chapters posted. You haven't lost your touch. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Nice chapter as usual Spleef ^^ You did very well :) I wonder how Zuko will teach Katara water-bending? hehe Keep up the good work ^^

This is a great story, but I would think that by now aang would go all white-eyed "possessed by the spirit of the avatar" in order to escape :). I'm also a little concerned that Katara is becoming a 'broken' woman, and as such is feeding off of the small morsels of gentleness that Zuko deems fit to bestow upon her. I guess what I'm saying is as much as I love the zuko/kat interactions, I think you probably need to move the story line a bit... Katara definitely needs an opportunity to escape with her spirit still intact with both Aang and Sokka.

Granted for a minute, I'm not a huge fan of this clearly American-made anime, this story is really well-written. Coming from one who doesn't like the series that much, I really mean what I said; this is really good. The way you describe things, the details and the interaction of characters if excellent. I read the first story of this and you have my compliments on that as well. Not to mention the very good spelling and grammar, that's not overly easy, even with a computer. Keep writing, and using your talents, because believe me, you've got it!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses
ivorycoral

Love, love, love you stories. Characters are great. More please.

Wow...that was good

hmmmmm.... I like the memories of Kitar better than The Shi Ryuu.
Do you speak japaneese or just look up words every now and then?
Shi ryuu is a stupid character in my opinion but he does seem like an
interesting person in Zuko's memories. I really like the story line alot
and the Prince OOC scenes are don skillfully enough so that is dosent
seem really that out of palce. you are doing a great jo w/ this story
please continue.

Nice chapter yet again Spleef ^^ Hehe I liked the part where Kitara made a dragon out of water, it was cool; Another nicely done chapter to the story ^^

I really love your story. You have a great grasp of character developement and plot evolution. There is one critic I must make though is the use of diction. While in today's society cuse words such as the ones you use are common in a more samurai society would not understand the concepts of the words, just wondering if you used a more modern word usage to make it easier for readers to connect to the characters? I also really like Zuko's cousin though his dialect is suited to the era it is more a common street tounge. If he grew up in the royal family he would have more of a Noble dialect. I was wondering if he has a lower dialect because he was raised as lower class? I really am a huge fan of your stories though and hope you update soon. You tie everything into each other so well every thing seems to have a part in the value of the whole.

i think that yu should make a Katara/kuzo (sp-?) /Haru threesome! Why-? um... becasue Haru did show interest in her and i <3 kuzo(sp-?)! lol. fro any challenages that yu may be taking, my challenage wud be having something that wud involve... FRUITS!! mayeb sum toys... ^.^ i'll keep looking for more of yoru updates!