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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Anonymous
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter 11 is pretty cool. I do hope you post this one on fanfic.net real soon with the rest of the story there. It will mean a lot for your fans there especially the ones who are under age. It's very decent and it's good enough to be there. I hope I'll see it there real soon. Keep up the good work and tone it down with the bad words and other things though.
person Botan aka Kayko15
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! Love the story. I know how you are with reviews... I crave off of them too. Anyway love this story. This chapter had me almost in tears. It was so sweet. Anyway I so can't wait for the next chapter. Later. K15
person Rae
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say how much I love this story! You have drawn me into this world and I will be trapped until you finish it! I love the dynamics between Katara ans Zuko and I also love how we see his softer side and how Katara is the one to bring that out in him. I can't wait for the next chappie!! Great Job!!
person Chad
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter as always ^^ The fights were quite good and everybody was in character in my opinion :) Can't wait to see more Spleef ^^
person hermionepotter17
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just found this story and was amazed. Zuko/Katara ship is my fave, and you potray the character SO PERFECT. Zuko isn't all mushy and sweet, but you can still tell he loves her. The smut is verrrry good...and hot! ^_~ If reviews make you update more quickly, then I guess I'll have to send in thousands more, because I love this story. Please update ASAP!
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story goes. I was a but dubious at the first chapter when I saw what Zuko did to Katara, but the plot is developing along well, you seem to be keeping evryone IC.
person Katuko (from fanfiction)
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is pretty awesome, although I try to speed through the lemon scenes, call me naive, but it's too much for me......eeehhh, anyways, based on what I did read, you are an AWESOME writer, really. It's very tender....romantic. It's sweet. Update soon!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person peekaboo
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a little confusing. It was short and nothing but flashbacks.
person ZOMG
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good stuff, really good stuff. More with the loving I say