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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. I'm always up for a good Zutara fic. ^-^
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zuko's mark is certainly more tasteful than getting "Property of Katara" tattooed on his balls. Excuse me, that was crude >_< sorry. This chapter is very sweet, I like that he offers her a new necklace (I wonder if he knows about that particualr Water Tribe custom...).
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the name Kiana is hawaiian. I think it means 'moon goddess' or the like. Or 'divine, heavenly'. Depending on what source you use.
Anyway, the story was OMG wonderful. i enjoyed it, very much.
Anyway, the story was OMG wonderful. i enjoyed it, very much.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The edit of Hot Water shines, just like the edit of Cold Fire. I remember how this story was before, and the changes you made make this even better.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've not finished it yet, but so far the revision looks GREAT.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness,this is WONDERFUL story!I love it, I adore it!I love this last chapter and this part the most:
"Wasn't that fun?"Katara asked with a breathy whisper.
"I refuse to answer that."Zuko shot back and she blew a raspberry.
I craked up laughing.Just imaginaging Zuko's face as he said that and then Katara's blows him a raspberry!
Simply great!
Jasmin
"Wasn't that fun?"Katara asked with a breathy whisper.
"I refuse to answer that."Zuko shot back and she blew a raspberry.
I craked up laughing.Just imaginaging Zuko's face as he said that and then Katara's blows him a raspberry!
Simply great!
Jasmin
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It got a little PWP toward the end. And a couple of the chapters after the Agni Kai had a rather filler-ish quality to them.
You cut back significantly on the ellipses though, which is definitely a good thing. And I'm a fan of manipulating capitalisation to emphasise words.
Also liked the attempt to incorporation cultural setting. Nice work, especially seeing we knew very little about the Fire Nation when you started this.
Overall a good story. A decent plot, a little repetitive in places but thankyou Agni there were no Mary-Sues!
You cut back significantly on the ellipses though, which is definitely a good thing. And I'm a fan of manipulating capitalisation to emphasise words.
Also liked the attempt to incorporation cultural setting. Nice work, especially seeing we knew very little about the Fire Nation when you started this.
Overall a good story. A decent plot, a little repetitive in places but thankyou Agni there were no Mary-Sues!
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice touch "...the Great War is over" awsome!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kasumi is the bounty hunter June
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would it be possible to fix the formatting of the first five chapters? I want to read the sequel, but the first couple chapters are just a jumble of words with no paragraph breaks. Couldn't you upload them again?