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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I have been reading your story for a long time
just haven't reviewed it. I love it. Please update as soon as possible!
~Tanaka~

I do hope you write more real soon. Your work is okay even though some of it is very confusing. I do hope Zuko and Katara will work something out and that she will find a way for the others to escape without any problems. I also do hope your story will have a happy ending. I'll see chapter 12 later on fanfiction.net. See you later.

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a sequal, a sequal, the awaited sequal!!!!!!!!!!!! luv this stori so far and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

oops...i 4got 2 add a lil somethin' somethin' in the last review...lol...for ur stori, if u havn't already decided, i vote for the pairing zuko/katara/haru...so...yeah...ok...lol...

Aww... sweet chappie... it's giving me the warm fuzzies :). I'm glad that you don't write Zuko as complete and total bastard. He's not evil, you know... just a bit short sighted. He hopes to return to a status quo that can never be again. I Can't wait for season II to start in January when the introduce his sister, Princess Zula (she was shown in a teaser in 'The Storm' standing next to Zhao.). She apparantly is just like her father! Anyway, great chappie, keep it up the good work... and yes, the song's a bit morbid; kind of reminded me of 'Ring around the Rosy'. :)

Oh, btw, if you're interested, here's a synopsis on season two: http://www.asmzine.com/features/conventions/sdcc05/sdcc05_avatar_report.html
And a WHOLE lot of beautiful story panels (make sure you click on the arrows, there are several pages of pictures!), including pictures of what I assume will be Zuko's love interest, Zuko's sister, and the northern water city (it's MASSIVE): http://www.asmzine.com/features/conventions/sdcc05/gallery/sdcc05-avatar-panel/

Nice chapter Spleef ^^ The singing part was sweet hehe and I can't wait to see what happens next ^^

Dock, by definition, means to stop the boat at a port to disembark onto the land. The floors of a sailing ship (or any kind of multi-level ship, really), are *Decks*. Heading down to lower decks is usually referred to as "Going below decks." The rear part of the ship is called the Stern, the top deck area the "Poop Deck"(No, I don't know why, it just *is*, okay?). And the forward-most part is the Bow. The left side is the Port side, and the right the Starboard. Are we all clear on our nautical terminology now? Good! You may continue.(Both my folks are ex-navy, okay?)

Food!
Zuko: She meant a mental type of food just like your reviews for running from fear itself.
Me: She still said food.
Zuko: Just review...
Me: Okay anyway. Great chapter. Zuko is such a hopeless romantic sometimes.
Zuko: Yeah I know but people still love and write about me.
Me: See what I mean? *points to Zuko*
Zuko: What's that suppose to mean?
Me: Nothing anyway. I'm glad Zuko has his moments. It's good that someone that his life loves a girl once in a while. So yeah. Update soon. And I'll be happy.
Zuko: What about me?
Me: And Zuko too he'll be happy. Later. K15

That was a cool chapter. I do hope that they'll work something out. I also do hope that everyone will be all right in your story. Good luck with chapter 13 and I'll keep an eye out for this chapter in "fanfiction.net". See you there!!!!