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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person DrakenD4
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LUV it, so AWESOME. hope for another UPdate soon. ^-^
person Chad
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a great chapter Spleef ^^ Very nice details and the characters were well done hehe I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
person whirleeQ
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic... but you know, you're breaking my heart with the Aang thing... shackled and hobbled! *sniff, sniff* - oh, and Sokka too, I guess ;).

The way you described the capital city was fantastic; I could picture it in my head... Very, *very* well done.

Not a Zula fan? Aww... why not? Personally, I think she could be a bit fun... especially since we've only seen maybe three shots of her so far (the opening sequence & the two teaser shots in the storm) and from that we can already derive all we need to know about her character...

Myself, I think I'm crushing on Zhao.. ;) We need more Zhao!!! Hey, it could have been worse, I could have said Bumi (who, from the neck down...)

Eh, it's way late and I'm saying crazy things...

Great job, spleef... eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :)

person Megan Consoer
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Anonymous
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is pretty good. I can't wait to see it on the other site. I'm glad you're back. I missed seeing your latest work. Your story is pretty deep, touching and kinda amazing. I do hope things will get better for Katara and Zuko, same with Sokka and Aang when they're locked up. Anyway keep up the good work and I'll see this chapter in fanfiction.net. See you there.
person Anonymous
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you write more real soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update real soon, okay? I'll be waiting here and at the other site. I'll keep checking for chapter 13. See you soon.
person Anonymous
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you write more real soon. This stuff is awesome. I do hope things will work out for everyone and that everything will be okay. I also do hope that they'll either be able to escape without any trouble or that they'll work something out with them. Anyway keep up the good work and see you later. Oh yeah, go easy on some of the parts of the story, okay?
person Satori
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey love this story about Zuko and Kitara please keep writing and hope to read and hear from you soon
Sincerly,
Satori
person Satori
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry mest up my e-mail there well hear it is hope to hear from you
person zuko\'s bitch
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the perfect zuko/katara story! i like how you have zuko being mean and nice