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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! Great chapter! Please update! I love this story!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I love it! Great job! Please continue!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE GREAT! You could could write an actual story if you tried .You put so much description and emotion that I feel as if I'm in the story .
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 13 KICKED ASS! I loved how you did Ozai...twas truely perfect! I hope there's more Ozai-Zuko-Katara interaction, and of course, yummy fluff and stuff!
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was teh best chapter. it was love making, i honestly prefer love making rather than lustful sex only. keep it up. ive been reading all day im going to take a hike now, lol.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi spleef. oh, im sorry i misspelled your name in the other reivew. my bad. anyway, good chapters, though it was ahrsh of katara to say she was zukos slave (wich she is) but put it as he forced her, as if she didnt enjoyed it at all!! gez... do you think he loves her? or, do you think SHE loves her? or is it just lust? anyway, nicely written. im cheering for you. im sorry i dont have any challenge to give, only congratulations. take care!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what i think you sorry is one of the best. Its hard to find really good writers but you handle yourself very well. I hope that you are also creating your own stories with your own characters because you have a true talent. You make people think and that is the greatest gift of all. I hope that his review makes you just a little happier. Have a wonderful day and keep up the good work. I look foward to the next chapter.
Much Luv,
Nyanko ^_^
Much Luv,
Nyanko ^_^
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what i think this is one of the best stories i've ever read on the net. Its hard to find really good writers but you handle yourself very well. I hope that you are also creating your own stories with your own characters because you have a true talent. You make people think and that is the greatest gift of all. I hope that his review makes you just a little happier. Have a wonderful day and keep up the good work. I look foward to the next chapter.
Much Luv,
Nyanko ^_^
Much Luv,
Nyanko ^_^
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! it was perfect!!!! i would most likely be afraid of Ozai too...i luv the way u described the garden, it seems like a wonderful place...plz update soon!!! ^_^
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter exceptionally well, though I would have thought that Katara wouldbe a bit mroe shellshocked about sokka, her only living family, instead of actually being in the fire nation.
It's very romantic to say: "They saw nothing but each other," but when taken literally, it's a bit ridiculous.
Still, I loved it.
It's very romantic to say: "They saw nothing but each other," but when taken literally, it's a bit ridiculous.
Still, I loved it.