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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Megan Consoer
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Chad
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter Spleef ^^ I hope things get better for Katara and Aang in the later chapters... I'm looking forward to seeing more ^^
person Anonymous
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, I 'm glad you're back. It's been a while since you've put up a chapter. I do hope things will work out for Sokka and Aang, let us know hat happen to those guys. I also do hope that Aang will kick Ozai's butt real soon and that Bai Zen Sang will be okay. One more thing, I do hope Katara and Zuko would work things out and still get along. Anyway this was a good chapter, I can't wait to see it at fanfiction.net. I'll see you there. Keep up the good work.
person Anonymous
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, it's me again. It's been a while since you came here. I do hope you hurry up with chapter 14; I'm dying to know what happens next like if the boys would be okay and they'll find a way to escape or if Zuko and Katara would express their feelings to each other and work things out. Please post chapter 14 as soon as you can, I can hardly wait for it. Don't let any of your fans down.
person estelstar
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, you did a good job in this chapter. zuko was... ... (speechless) just great, just tender enough without being sappy and pathetic (wich i hate) im still sad that she doesnt love him, coz he really does love her. but for the other part i sence her guiltiness for being with him makking love while aang and sokka are who knows where. but anyway, im here cheering for you and those who review are because the truly love your work. spleef fans united!! btw, you said you where a geek, i found that funny, with all the sex you write you didnt look like a geek, lol. i was afraid you where mean or snobby, but you seem really nice. again, im cheering for you. i finanly finished reading this story, ill wait patiently for the next chapter. take care and God bless. avatar geeks united!!!
person estelstar
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah!! i cant see my reivews!! i hope theyr working!! geez... if not, in a nutshell, i love your story. hugs and God bless!!
person Anonymous
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I do hope you write more real soon. I'm wondering if Zuko and Katara would express their true feelings to each other and that they would work something out. I also do hope that Sokka and Aang would be okay and they would find a way out. ANyway I can't wait to see chapter 14. I 'll keep an eye out for it here and at fanfiction.net. Please write more real soon. See you later.
person estelstar
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome. more deep into theyr minds. im so glad zuko loves her, but its a shame she doesnt love him.... sigh.. it was just lust.. but it so damn hard to be inlove with the one who will kill your friend and brother.... man.... no matter what she does, she will always betray someone. wheter is aang, zuko... or herself... i hate those dilemas... (ive been there) at least here it wasnt worth it though, if anything i had a great experience for life. nothing more.
person crazii80
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally love it, I love your writing, keep it up! ^_^
person Krista
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I have been reading this story for a while now and it is REALLy interesting. When I first read Cold Water, my friends thought I was crazy for reading something with sexual content in it. But I told them that there was nothing wrong with it, and it was actually kind of funny to think of the characters actually doing that. But for your future chapters, I'm excited to know if they actually get out, or if Katara stays. I very much look forward to more of your stories!! Bye!!!
--Krista--