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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person i am the fire lord
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. good chapter. nice fighting, haha
person i am the fire lord
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so they finally got there...should be interresting
person i am the fire lord
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ozai's cool
person Arwey
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As usual, it was wonderful. More Ozai interaction, which I adored...cause he's just so dang evil! Poor Aang though *huggles* Cannot wait for Chap 15!
person WarriorAtHeart
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your a very talented writer! Keep up the good work!
person ML7
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you write chapter 15 real soon. I'm dying to know what happened to Sokka and Aang, and if they found a way to escape. I'm also curious to know if Zuko and Katara would express their true feelings to each other. Anyway keep up the good work and see you later!
person Katuko
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww...poor aang...can't wait till they bust out.
person Anonymous
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. What's taking so long? I'm dying to know what happens next like what happened to the boys and how is Katara and Zuko doing. Please write chapter 15 real soon. See you later.
person krista
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome....poor aang....hope the next chapter brings more drama!!!
person Mica
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, *very* in character!
I'm starting to get worried about Aang and Sokka...I hope they'll be alright.

It's going at a good pace, but I'm at a point where all I can say is "what next?"