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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Artemis
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what about Sokka? where is he? how is he? Is Katara going to get pregnet? or raped or what? plz, update soon!!!

Goddess Artemis
person WarriorAtHeart
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aang! *sniffle* Please continue! I love this story! Your such an awesome writer!
person justanotheravatarfan
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! A new chapter! That scene was sure intense. Aang & the gang are in such an impossible situation, I don't know how they'll EVER get out! The suspense is killing me.
person Arwey
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...do I smell the winds of change?
person Nemo
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should let Katara see Zuko near the girl in leather.
person chickygurl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the saddest chapter ever. And you know what's even more sad? That that would actually happen to Aang if the Fire Lord got a hold of him. WOW. You're a very good writer. Keep this up.
person cateye91
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor katara...poor aang...poor zuko...ozai's just a bastard...lol...oh! and poor iroh...lol...how come everything's so sad...we need happiness! we need ozai 2 die a painfully slow death! lol...oh well...i still luv it exactly how it is...2 great chapters and i'm waitin 4 more...thank god u update faster than most stories i read...everything takes 4ever it seems (no offence 2 da oder peopstals! lol) update soon! ^_^
person Anonymous
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, I do hope you continue this. This stuff is amazing. Good luck with chapter 16. I'm dying to know what happened to Sokka. I also do hope that everything will work out okay for everyone and that Ozai will lose. See you soon. Keep it up, all right.
person creativewritinginc
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great story! I loved it. There will be more chapters right? And did you know you CAN put that stuff on ff.net? All you have to do is up the rating to M (R).
person mimi
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gosh you are such a great writer!!!

seriously...i cried...but katara is annoying me...

keep going!