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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters, I have to thank you for how fast you've been releasing these. I really have been enjoying the rewrite and look forward to the next installment.
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was a little hesitent about reading this story rewrite because "Hot Water" has been one of my favorites, but I have really enjoyed the story and the changes. I look forward to reading more.
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations! You've been rec'd!
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The Reader's Have Chosen is a fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers.
Your story, "Hot Water", has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Monthly Poll: Misc. Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page.
You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Misc. Monthly Poll at (without spaces): http:// thereadershavechosen. eternflame. com/ forum/ index. php? topic= 1517.0
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,
i have read up to chap 14 in "Hot water" and I am an honest but analytical person that enjoys fanfic alot, and is a big fan of the avatar stories, and I have just recently came into the avatar fanfic verse and I am a heavy zutara fan. And I have read some fic that screamed adventure romance, smut and all the things you promised in the very first chapter up in the author's note. You said that this was not a cliched story and I have to agree with u there it is such a wondeful concept and I have enjoyed the story so far but there were a few things that were eating me alive, and forgive me for my following rant.
You are one of the top AFF avatar writers and I honestly respect that, but like any writer you should want honesty and I am going to give it, as well as ask a few questions. You said no OOC-ness of the main charcters but I fail to agree, zuko is so OOC i am sorry, but i understand it to point, I still like his moments but the boy is completely blind when it comes to seeing the madness that he does, and iroh is so not like iroh, He has never once told zuko what he is doing was wrong, and we all know the cannon iroh does this and imparts his knowledge whether zuko wants it or not.
And this leads me to my biggest hiccup with this fic, katara she is just to daft, to docile and submissive. I understand in your fic she is untrained and not a warrior like in the cannon, I get that but Katara would have given zuko hell before she let herslef get caught up in him, yes she could care for him and want their moments together, but she was too carefree and not questioning a thing and not even demanding what they did to appa or momo, I found it strange that the topic of the animals didnt even come up. She could have screamed and yelled at him and rebeled, it was like all she could think about was sex, zuko, sex, think about escaping then aang and sokka. Sokka was her brother and she didnt implore zuko to release him she didnt beg throw a tantrum or even hate him for a second.
I find it all odd, and if you think I am bashing you I am respectfully not, i just want want to pick your brain for these answers, maybe I am missing something, and especially when they came back to the fire nation. And that part where zuko acts like everything is ok, even when his father is telling him to wipe out a nation, iroh is being ignored and aang is being tortured, even katara doesnt even get angry at him and hasnt even worried and begged to see sokka even. they both act like sex is all they can think about, if that is in the equation to hell with everything else. has she forgotten that Zuko is the cause of all her problems, you said you wanted a realistic story but i dont think you made her realistic enough. You could probably care less of my opinion cuz you have like almost 800 reviews and I respect that but i speak the truth and would want someone to do the same for me and my writing.
Again I am sorry if offended you but I am honest enough to let you know my handle and even leave you my email for you to get back to me. I am honestly frustrated by her and zuko's behaviour. My email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com. I know you are the queen of avatar fics, but i just speak my mind, i dont follow the norm and your storyline is great. So hit me up soon hopefully so we can argue intelligently.
Respect
Scarlet
i have read up to chap 14 in "Hot water" and I am an honest but analytical person that enjoys fanfic alot, and is a big fan of the avatar stories, and I have just recently came into the avatar fanfic verse and I am a heavy zutara fan. And I have read some fic that screamed adventure romance, smut and all the things you promised in the very first chapter up in the author's note. You said that this was not a cliched story and I have to agree with u there it is such a wondeful concept and I have enjoyed the story so far but there were a few things that were eating me alive, and forgive me for my following rant.
You are one of the top AFF avatar writers and I honestly respect that, but like any writer you should want honesty and I am going to give it, as well as ask a few questions. You said no OOC-ness of the main charcters but I fail to agree, zuko is so OOC i am sorry, but i understand it to point, I still like his moments but the boy is completely blind when it comes to seeing the madness that he does, and iroh is so not like iroh, He has never once told zuko what he is doing was wrong, and we all know the cannon iroh does this and imparts his knowledge whether zuko wants it or not.
And this leads me to my biggest hiccup with this fic, katara she is just to daft, to docile and submissive. I understand in your fic she is untrained and not a warrior like in the cannon, I get that but Katara would have given zuko hell before she let herslef get caught up in him, yes she could care for him and want their moments together, but she was too carefree and not questioning a thing and not even demanding what they did to appa or momo, I found it strange that the topic of the animals didnt even come up. She could have screamed and yelled at him and rebeled, it was like all she could think about was sex, zuko, sex, think about escaping then aang and sokka. Sokka was her brother and she didnt implore zuko to release him she didnt beg throw a tantrum or even hate him for a second.
I find it all odd, and if you think I am bashing you I am respectfully not, i just want want to pick your brain for these answers, maybe I am missing something, and especially when they came back to the fire nation. And that part where zuko acts like everything is ok, even when his father is telling him to wipe out a nation, iroh is being ignored and aang is being tortured, even katara doesnt even get angry at him and hasnt even worried and begged to see sokka even. they both act like sex is all they can think about, if that is in the equation to hell with everything else. has she forgotten that Zuko is the cause of all her problems, you said you wanted a realistic story but i dont think you made her realistic enough. You could probably care less of my opinion cuz you have like almost 800 reviews and I respect that but i speak the truth and would want someone to do the same for me and my writing.
Again I am sorry if offended you but I am honest enough to let you know my handle and even leave you my email for you to get back to me. I am honestly frustrated by her and zuko's behaviour. My email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com. I know you are the queen of avatar fics, but i just speak my mind, i dont follow the norm and your storyline is great. So hit me up soon hopefully so we can argue intelligently.
Respect
Scarlet
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PS: I think you have amazing smut writing skills by the way *blushes* you make 14yr and 16yr sex seem perfect and smexy, I strive for that factor when I start writing my HP fics and throwing the older with younger girls I am twisted that way...srry. The passion between them is commendable and I do applaud everything else really.
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell. This story was HOT! Especially chapter 2. OMG, I am so turned on right now.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the "Dune" reference in ch. 19!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, even if it did take me two days to read it. :)
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story....
i reaally hoped that ur going to write some more....
when they get older... and have a child....
anyways.. thak u for writting!!
ur work is really great!
i reaally hoped that ur going to write some more....
when they get older... and have a child....
anyways.. thak u for writting!!
ur work is really great!