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Good Lord I love this story! I was sooo scared for Kat- though I admit it would've been interesting for Ozai to find her in the concubine's rooms. Hopefully more Ozai-Kat interaction later on?

Either way, I loved this chap. It took me FOREVER to figure out that Hana was Zhao's sis...but ya know, as a blonde I'm not supposed to be clever, lol. Please make this a happy ending. RedNovember just ended her fic sadly, and I don't know if I could handle (great, now I sound mentally unstable) another sad ending. I would cry, lol.

Can't wait for your next chapter!

PS- Where is poor Iroh?

nice. very nice, update soon

Seems to me like either Zuko's gonna confront Ozai head on, or "kidnap" Aang while having Sokka issued to his ship as an onboard slave, and with them and Katara proceed to book! Maybe even secretly teach Firebending to Aang? Oh, well, your story. By the way, you are aware there are two of us refusing to give an identity, right? Laters.

excellent!! can't wait till next chapters!!!

Anonymous, your apology is accepted. I know you were not neccessarily being rude, and I always appreciate your kind comments. Dont sweat it ok? ^^

If I insulted you, I'm sorry. I wasn't telling you where to post it, I was just a little too anxious to see those chapters on the other site. I didn't mean it in a bad and harsh way, I was just excited to see the new chapter there. I know it takes a lot of work, I don't mean to rush you. I get excited about things I like that I become a big fan about it. Next time I'll just comment your work and tell you see you later on the other site, okay? I don't want to cause you stress; you are becoming one of my favorite authors. I always come here to read your latest work and look for it waiting for it patiently. Then when I see that recent chapter, I read it here until it shows up on the other site. I'm patient about this, I just get too excited about seeing your latest work, that's all. Once again, I'm really very sorry. I'll try to control myself next time. Anyway keep up the good work and see you later!!!! I do hope you'll forgive me, I didn't mean to be pushy or rude. I'm just a big fan of you Avatar work, that's all. See you soon at the other site; take you time. I'm not in a hurry.

THis is getting interesting please dont stop,but Im wondering what happened to Saka
in all and I hope you update ASAP keep up the good work

Interesting chapter Spleef ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next involving Ozai hehe Keep up the good work :)

It's been a while since you updated your story. I do hope you hurry up with chapter 16. I'm dying to know what happened to Sokka. I 'm also curious to know will the boys be able to escape and pound Ozai, and that things will be okay with Zuko and Katara. Anyway I'll keep an eye out for chapter 16, hope to see it soon.

Hi there. I do hope you accept my apology in my last reply. This chapter was pretty good. I can't wait to see it on fanfiction.net. Take your time, I'll just keep reading it here till I see your story updated there. I don't mind waiting. I always keep an eye out for something new. Just in curiosity not being pushy. Anyway good luck with chapter 17, take your time, all right. Keep up the good work and see you later.