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A picture? No, wasn't me, I can't even draw to save my life. But I have read, and reviewed, your J/D fics. Now, can Zuko actually defeat his father? Can't wait for the next one. Laters.

OOOOH!
Zuko: WHat is it this time?
Me: Agni Kai... you're going to die!
Zuko: What I am not.
Me: Of course you are you're challenging your pathetic excuse for a father.
Zuko: *Narrows eyes* I'll win!
Me: *Changes voice to match Iroh's* Remember your basics Prince Zuko.
Zuko: Whatever.
Me: Anyway I so look forward to the next chapter. Update soon. Later. K15

yay!!! hmm...i think that it will be sad for a lil longer, but then it will be a happy ending! well...it better be...or ur gonna have'ta write a sequal w/ a happy ending...sad endings are just...sad...lol...great chapter! update soon! ^_^

I say Ozai dies a horrible, painful death. A very horrible painful death. That would make me oh so happy, happy indeed. As would it a bunch of other people after this chapter, I have a hunch.

Hi there, this chapter was pretty cool and intense. I like it when you made Zuko speak up during that meeting. I'm also impressed when you had him challenge Ozai; I do hope Zuko wins and he set things right. I do hope we hear what happened to the boys and Iroh, and when Zuko and Katara confess their love to each other. Good luck with chapter 18. Keep up the good work, hope to see ch. 17 on the other site real soon; take your time on it, I'm not in a hurry. See you real soon.

Really nice chapter Spleef ^^ Can't wait to find out what happens with that agnikai hehe

Hey there, I do hope you write chapter 17 and put it here real soon. We're dying to know what happens next. I don't want to put any pressure on you, take your time, but please update soon. Your stuff is awesome. Keep up the good work and hope to see you soon.

And the plot thickens... lovely chapter. Ozai is such a bastard. Loved the interactions with the concubines, and totally loved the fact that Zuko is waking up and smelling the coffee, so to speak. Great job :).

Poor Sokka ;)

update soon! this is getting really good! so much drama,so much suspense...

Hi there, it's me again. This chapter was pretty good. I do hope things will get better for everyone. I sorta got an idea for one of your soon-to-be chapters, like the gang can freed Ozai's concubines and Hana & Sokka could get together. I do hope the boys will try to escape and things will get better for everyone. I also do hope Zuko and Katara will tell each other their true feelings for each other. See ya later at the other site with chapter 16; take your time putting it there, I don't mind waiting. I'll keep reading here till I'll see it there. Good luck with chapter 17.