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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Chou hime
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... I have a feeling that 'someone' ( Ozai, I hope) will die! Die die die die Ozai! Love the length of the chapter,too! I'm so happy! A new episode comes on next friday the 23rd! Yay!.>
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O! I love the story, I just spent litaraly all day reading it. please hurry up and update *shakes fist at cliffhanger*
person taybay500
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! An Agni Kai between Ozai and Zuko?!? This is gonna' be intense. I can't wait for the update!
person Katuko
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aah! so UNPREDICTABLE...except after I read to the middle of this chapter...can't believe he's doing this for katara...dun dun...can't wait, next chap!
person fightingdreamer5
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story i'v ever read, god its like a friggen novel, i'm dieing for the 18th chapter...DARN YOU CLIFFHANGER!
*runns away with Zuko*
person orbitalchild
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEED. NEXT. CHAPTER. *lies on floor curled in a ball sucking her thumb*
person Mica
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I am a bit annoyed that your giving the names one more attention than me, I'll deal with it.
...for now...

Either way, this chapter rocks! Excellent us of POV, good Zuko introspection, and a killer ending!
I can't wait for the next chapter, thoguh I woudn't want to be in your shoes...

...it's going to be a bitch to write.

Either way, much love to you and all your fanfics!

Your faithful reviewer,
Mica
person Artemis
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE!! YA ZUKO! about time he got some back bone. Stand up to that basterd Father of your and give him a scar he'll never forget! or better yet. urn him till he dies, then take over the thron! Hahaha! but you must protect the Women!! or i will never forgive you.

Goddess Artemis
person Mushrambolover
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha! i read wat i have not reviewed!!!!! it's good. but u meanie butt!!!! leaving us in a cliffy! ~.~ just update kay'?
person Anonymous
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I didn't draw any pictures like you said in your last response in your chapters. I just show up to see if there's any new chapters and respond to them. Here's a hint in finding out who I am, compare my reviews to the ones on the other site. I do hope you put chapter 18 up real soon. I can hardly wait to see it. Take your time, but do it real soon. Keep up the good work and see you soon.