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AH! Update please! *Sends nice thoughts of pretty Zuko to motivate you*

Please hurry! *cries*

UPDATE DAMEIT IT IS GOOD AND CAN'T WAIT A ROUND FOR YOU T UPDATE WHEN YOU FEEL LIKE IT KA SO FOR THE LOVE OF AVATAR UPDATE YOU CRULE FIEND ( PISS OF BAD SEPPLING CUSE OF IT)

I don't want to rush you or anything, but please hurry up with chapter 18. We're all dying from suspense here. I'm dying to see what happens next in the story. I'm curious to know if Zuko would pound Ozai and other things. Please update real soon. Your stuff is awesome; don't make us wait any longer.

Hi there, I don't mean to be rude and all. Please put chapter 18 up here real soon. I'm dying from the suspense here. It's been a while since you updated. I want to know if Zuko would pound Ozai to the pound and he and Katara would admit their true feelings to each other. I'm also curious to see what happened to Sokka and the others, and to see if the boys can escape or not. Let us know something real soon, okay? I don't mean to be pushy, I'm just anxious to see what happens next.

>.>; There should also be some FxF in here, somewhere. <.<;

YAHAHA! I looove this story! Ne hurry and update okay?
PLeease!?

Spleef, you just rock... this chapter was very, very intense -- gripping the edge of my seat intense. Loved the 'board game', as if the war was nothing but a game, a way to amuse themselves, and the people involved just pawns. Brilliant metaphor there, and well done. Ozai is more like a demi-god to the fire nation than a leader, and he revels in the absolute power, control, and obedience that he demands from his people. I'm hating him more and more with each chapter. It was great to see how Zuko's thoughts progressed during the meeting, and I could almost hear the breaking of the last straw on his back when destroying the southern water tribe was brought up. I'm really glad Zuko challenged his father (finally), and rathar thought that his father was deliberately provoking him into doing so by suggesting that they attack the southern water tribe to begin with. At any rate, great chapter as usual and update soon! Quite a cliffie you've left us hanging on! --julie

I don't meant to be rude or pushy, but please hurry up with that next chapter. I'm dying to know what happens next. I do hope that Zuko would defeat Ozai and set things right so Katara's people won't be destroyed. Take your time, but please hurry; we're all dying to see chapter 18.

OMG! the suspense is killing me!
keep it up, it's way 2 good 2 stop!

LONG LIVE HIPPIES!
INSANITY AT ITS FINEST

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