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Finally I mean u took forever but please keep on
going this is a very good story this chapter made me come into tears I
Love It !!!
Please update soon and I hope Zuko wins this challege an he gets to tell Katara that he loves him
please let this end on a good note.
Well keep up the good work and UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!

Hi there, this chapter is awesome. I'm glad that Aang is free, but I do hope that Sokka will be able to get out as well. I also do hope that Zuko will win the duel and that everything will be okay. I think I got an idea for your new chapter: Have Sokka, Katara, and Aang get together and they secretly disguise themselves to get to the arena and help out if things get too messy or have Zuko use Katara as his strength/inspiration to help him find the power to defeat Ozai so he can win. You know let him think of her near him as encouragement to help him succeed. I do hope these ideas will help you with chapter 19. Anyway good luck with chapter 19 and don't de afraid of writing it; just think of the new episodes coming up every other Friday to help you face it head on. Check out Nick.com's TV Schedule for them. Keep up the good work and see you real soon. Oh yeah, make sure Iroh will be in chapter 19, okaY? See you later!!!!

This is not a hentai......
THIS is a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God! I love your story!!!!!

ZUKO MUST FREAKIN' WIN! "nuff said

Wow.

You've totally outdone yourself... I absolutely LOVED this chapter -- loved Zuko in the 'Blue Spirit' role, loved Aang's thoughts and Zuko's interactions with him, and adored Zuko doing the right thing by letting them go... The Katara/Zuko scene actually brought tears to my eyes... really, really great job... I do not envy you the task of writing the next chapter, though. Ouchie :).

oO Very suspenseful chapter Spleef ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next >_>

Hi, it's been a while since you updated this story. When are you going to put chapter 18 up here?!!! I do hope you update this real soon. I know you're working on another story, but please update this one. Your fans and I are dying to know what happens next. I also do hope you haven't quit, if I'm being too rude or pushy, I'm sorry. I'm just dying to see what happens with everyone. Please let us know something real soon, okay? Hope to see a new chapter real soon.

Hey, I don't mean to be rude, but when are you going to update this story?!!!!! It's been days since you last updated it. We're all dying to see chapter 18!!!! We can hardly wait to see Ozai get his butt kicked and see Zuko and Katara express their true feelings to each other. I'm also curious to know what happened to the others. Please update this real soon, I'm begging you!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!

it's such a good story i suggest that while everything is being prepared for the agni kai, that katara somehow finds a way to free sokka and aang and that at last moment all three help Zuko defeat his father.

I'd have to say that this is one of my favorite stories I've seen on this site for a while. A bonus since it's about The Last Avatar as well! I've been reading this story for the past few days and I love your writing style. Quite the refreshment. Keep it up and I can't wait till your next chapters!