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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Firework13
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How sad!

For the Challenge thing Why don't u draw the scene with the Assasin and how he almost killed Katara.
person Lady Amaya
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, YOU CAN NOT KILL ZUKO! ((Starts beating Ozai dummy with bat)) YOU (Smack) LEAVE (Smack) ZUKO (smack) ALONE! (Head flies off of the dummy)) Er . . . . (Hids bat behind back) Good chapter!
person Chou hime
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO! I HAVE to know what happens next!! update really soon pls! Ja Ne!
person Zukoscute2
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! it's so sad, i luved the fluff, but wut about zuko and katara? wut will happen now? will zuko lose? if he wins, will he ever find katara? so many question, i need answers, and i need answers NOW!

Zukoscute2
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its my second time reading this and I still love it. Good luck with the next chapter...PLEASE HURRY UP!
person Katuko
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw I think I'm gonna cry...my god. ok, I want to see...their last departure, at the secret entrance, right before she leaves...yea!
person RealiTBYte101
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! :)
person Kai
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I LOVE YOU FOR RIGHTING THIS CHAPTER!! I was so pleased to see that you have written another chapter. Is Katara having second thoughts on him...oh...maybe she doesn't even love him. NO! I must not think down on this! Please write another chapter soon!!! ^________^
person Anonymous
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you get chapter 19 up here real soon. Oh yeah, I got another idea for it, have the gang free Ozai's concubines and have Hana & Sokka fall in love with each other. I do hope my ideas will inspire you and help you write chapter 19. Anyway good luck with that and see you real soon!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is going to get nasty. As to illistrations, how about a pic of Aang in his new disguise and the "Blue Spirit" instructing him to get his rear in gear? Or a shot of mister Dragon could be good. Laters.