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O_O ZUKO WON! Spleef, that Agni Kai had me on the edge of my seat and I was actually cheering out loud for Zuko! He did it! He beat Ozai! I'm glad he did the right thing in letting Aang and Katara go. T-T And I almost cried when Zuko said he didn't want to let Katara go. How sweet. He better tell her he loves her soon. But, Katara probably knows that. At least I think. >.> Must read more of your work....And I have no idea what line you used from which Sci-fi, but I'll go over the chapter again to see if I spot it. *Hands you muffin* ^.^

KA-WOOOOSH!!! Well, not exactly what I expected, but fantastic all the same! I can't help but wonder where this going to go to next, but I look forward to it all the same! Laters!

the three-hundreth post is MINE!
BWAHAHAHAHAAA!!!

...sorry about that...I just like to be noticed...

*scurries off*

OMG!!!!! that was a GREAT chapter!!!! I loved it!!! finaly, the bastard of all bastards dies!!!!! yay for Zuko....... this calls for some celebration smut.........><
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There are no words to describe what I feel towards this chapter. The closest I can come to is utterly brilliant.

Update now damnit

As per usual, fantastic chapter. The action was well done - and so was the setting. You write a lot of description into the surroundings, making it easy to visualize the scene as it is happening. I'm glad that you didn't have Zuko knock out Ozai right away, because that wouldn't have been beleivable. The way you handled it was... perfect... the sudden, and from Ozai's standpoint, unexpected burst of power that completely incinerated the fire lord! Fantastic! I also loved that Iroh was right there, waiting....

Great job; can't wait to see the fall out of this! U rock!

julie

That was glorious!

I know the line...It's that bit about "seeing the fine line between the potential and Actual" right?
I remember something like that from a sci Fi Analogy Edited by Issac Asimov.
I'll have to look it up to give an exact title, but it's a story about a scientist who's working on a way to choose the gender of your child before birth...it turns out that he has these premotintions (or something very like premonitions0 about how this research will go, and the entire affair more or less hinges on which woman he marries. With one woman, he ends up never finishing the work, and the earth declines into a slow, peacftul, pleasurable death. With the other, the work is a sucess, and the world becomes a grey, pointless, emotionless totolitarian state. There's a nice twist at the end, but I won't tell you just in case I'm wrong. I don't want to needlessly ruin the ending for you.

Wonderful chapter anyway! Really looking up to the reunion chapter, should be nice and angsty, and lots of fun to write!

Your loyal Reviewer,
Mica

Hi there, I do hope you continue real soon. I can hardly wait to see chapter 19. Please hurry up, the suspense is not only killing me, but the rest of your fans too. I can't wait to see the Agni Kai and see Ozai get his butt kicked and the others join up again. Hope to see you real soon, I do hope my ideas help you inspire you. See you later!!!!

This Fic is very Serieous, but in a style that I like.

Please keep it up cause I can't wait for CHAP 18!