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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person SleepingDragon13
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me: GO ZUKO GO ZUKO! (Waves Pom poms)
Inner child: So...I don't get how he is related to Agni.
Me: Then you were not paying attention...ADD!
Inner child: I do not have...Look a butterfly!
Me: (Rolls eyes) You were saying?
Inner child: I was saying what?
Me: o.0
person Lady Amaya
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god yes! Ozai finally died. Up next Zhao...just kidding. I love the story. You said More chapters are comeing, so im content.
person Zukoscute2
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sniffle. such a beautiful story, and yet, so sad. update soon. i'm honestly worrying that Zuko will never find Katara. plz, update soon.
person Selina
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO COOL! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR ALONG TIME. Wish authors of other fanfics were as good as you. UPDATE SOON
person animeloverja
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Katara coming back? Please update soon! IN A HURRY!
person damari
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a surprising chapter, you hardly have spelling mistakes and i must say you surpassed yourself with this chaper but i must suggest that in the next chaper that you focus on Aang and Katara.^-^
person Laura
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow! I loved your story! It was so good! I LOVE Avatar and I'm currently working on my own story, just to pass the time. You're story is so inspiring. Good luck with finishing it, I can't wait to see what else you have in store!
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How sweet. Now, we just need to see how Sokka's been holding up since we last saw him, and maybe have a brief segue to what Aang's up to. Perform at yur leisure! Laters.
person kayko15
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is it over?
Zuko: What stupid question is that?
Me: It's not a stupid question. It's important. It decides the fate of the world.
Zuko: It's not the end of the world if it's over.
Me: Yeah You're right. ANyway great chapter. I loved it. I hope, if it isn't the last chapter, that you update soon.
Zuko: Does that surprise you that she said that?
Me: Zuko shut up. Later. K15