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it was soooo good i love it!
Did you say that there was going to be a third part?
Don't get mad at me, but there were a few type-o's

Great Job! You're a great writer! =]

that was sooo awesome...i think i cried... :( ! and who is Hana?? Or is that the Hannah that was Pzao's concubine...i dunno. Well good job, it was wonderful!! Can't wait for more!!

Very nice chapter ^^ Lots of details and stuff hehe

I can't wait to see what happens next Spleef :)

YAY! Zuko finally said "I love you." It's about time!

Hey it's me again. I'm glad you wrote this chapter even though I was expecting it in a few days, and I'm surprised that you brought Zuko and Katara together so soon. I do hope you continue this or make another sequel. This story is one of my top favorites. I do hope we hear more from the others real soon. I will not rush you, take your time. I do hope I see you again real soon. Later.

Yay!! Another good chapter, what else can we expect from you?

Oh, so touching! Great.

WHEEEEEEEEE! New chapter! It made me soooooooooo happy! KAWII! Zuko really needed a hug. Granted in the show itself he needs a hug, but we can all hope for that, ne?
Hmmm...Katara feeling ill...I'll just wait for the next chapter to see if what I think the "sickness" is, is what I think it is.
Yay Iroh! You write him well...

YAY! I'm so glad that you had written these two chapters. I've been anticipating what you would write next and with success, you were able to pull it off. I'm sooo glad that he finally told her that he loves her. I wish she could've responded, but eh. She's physically weak and tired. Wouldn't blame her. Can't wait for your next chapter(s)!!

very beautiful chappie, girlfriend... awwww... :) It's just... wow. I can't even pick highlights, I enjoyed it so much! Your handling of Iroh was spot on -- good job there. Zuko's reactions to his father's death, to the avatar's escape, and to Iroh were just... perfect. Fantastic imagery, all the way around. I can imagine that some of Ozai's old advisers are none to happy right now... and I would think that Zuko would have to prove his authority to them before he's fully accepted as the new fire lord, since they already think that his is 'weak'... and probably will think so even more, now that Katara is back by his side. You handled Katara well too -- I love that she's confused... I also love that she is not in the same emotional place as Zuko. Let's face it, he's done some pretty awful things to her and her friends... I cannot see her falling 'in love' with him just yet; at least, not while she still is afraid of him. Her non-response to his admission is very realistic, and I applaud you for that... it is so much more beleivable than her suddenly returning the sentiment... anyway, great job as always... u rock socks.

:)