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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For Chapter 7 and the lemon thing, i don't know if you know or not, but that's called 69-ing. or something like that.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I LOVE your story! It's very true about Zuko's situation with Ozai, and what probably would happen if daddy found out his son was sqrewing a water tribe girl. Lol, that sounded weird.
Zula haters unite! I also must say that I hate her. My character, whose name I am using, is Zuko's sister. It steams me up really bad that they had that happen!
Zula haters unite! I also must say that I hate her. My character, whose name I am using, is Zuko's sister. It steams me up really bad that they had that happen!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE A FANART FROM THAT ONE CHAPTER WHEN KATARAS WEARING THAT MAKEUP AND I SAW THAT ONE FANART WITH ZULA AND KATARA, YOU SHOULD MAKE A JUN AND KATARA FANART. AND ZUKO COULD BE IN THE BACKGROUND AND JUN'S TELLING HIM THAT KATARAS TO PRETTY FOR HIM. THAT WOULD BE SO COOL.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I was mentioned! It was so good! I'm happy Kataras back, but Zuko still sounds alittle posesive. Oh well. I loved it alot. I hope that wasn't the last chapter
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so pretty. i luved this chapter. is the story over? i hope it isn't. continue the good work.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
B E A U Tiful ending for this chapter. I couldn't have expected a better turnout. Very...well, it summarized the entire story really really well until this point. Is it going on? I'd like that, to see how everything goes on^^ please don't stop writing!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! Surely you can't be done with the story yet! I hope you keep it going. This is the best Avatar fanfic I've read (and believe me when I say, I've read a lot!) Keep up the fabulous work!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, tht was good. zuko finally admits his love for Katara. Does this fic continue or is an epilogue to som things up the oly thing left?
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Great job at the ending! Keep up the awesome work!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your stories a lot. Don't get me wrong they are wonderful, but you still forgot to put a disclaimer. I like your stories therefore i do not wish for them to be cut from this site of any other. Continue your great work. I will make a better review for your epic tale later.
Love
-Nyanko
Love
-Nyanko