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Spleef you rok! ^.^ You rok hard! Hehe, I can't get enough of reading this story. If I was Katara, I would be scared too and be ready to run away. But yeah, Zuko is one determined person. ^.~ That's what makes him so great and I think the scar is sexy too. xD >> Now, I wonder if, maybe, just possibly that "Tara" could actually be with child....Hm.....o.o Katara and Zuko would be young parents....Not that they couldn't handle it....But whoa. xD And I am so proud of Zuko! Yay! Zuko has ended the war....In a sense...>> well, at least we know he does't want it to continue any longer....Now, I have one more thought. I wonder what Aang and Katara's brother might think of the whole situation or would they make an attempt to save Katara? Hm....So many questions.....=D Any-hoo, can't wait until the next chapter(s) YOU MUST HURRY OH GREAT SPLEEFY! *Bows*

Oh, I forgot to say that I think it would be nice to see fanart of when Zuko was talking to Agni during the "Agni Kai".....Or, when Katara came back and was standing behind Zuko after Iroh left. The "after math" chapter. Or a picture of Katara when she first tried on Zuko's robes. =^.^= All right. I'm done........>> HURRAY! *Runs off to hide in the mashmellow pool* Laterz!

Hot damn!

Excellent chapter... you handled Katara's thoughts and emotions very, very well. All of that and before noon too ;).

Are you making Katara preggers? If so... well, weight loss and stress is awfully difficult on a first trimester pregnancy; not to mention at 14/15, with her body not yet fully developed, childbirth would be... difficult.

Loved the bedroom talk between the two... very, very hot. And your lemon writing is getting better and better each time!

u rock teh house, babe

:)

Whoosh! That was a mouthful! I think you could have broken it down into two seperate chapters, or more! Lord know, it takes forver to read. And, oh, dear, could the birth control herbs have failed? :o Oopsie! Oh, well, that's life for you. Now, if Katara can just get her appetite back and her weight back up to normal. I await the next chapter! Laters.

Oh...does she even love him back? I wonder if she could be pregnant. Those herbs can only do so much. *laughs* Well, anyways, enough rambling. I'm very pleased to read abother chapter of you work. I hope to see more soon! Keep up the great work!

Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. I do hope that there will be peace between the nations real soon. I also do hope that Katara will see Aang, Sokka, and the rest of the people she knew and love again. That and that she and Zuko will work things out. Nice to see you again and keep up the good work.

Huzzah! The plot continues and actually makes some kind of sense!
*dances*

Still don't knw what happened to that dragon-face guy...and Aang...we need something about him and Sokka...no way Sokka'd just give up on saving Katara like that. He's too stubborn of an idiot. I think it'd be funny for him to walk it acting all heroic, only to be treated like some "honorable brother-of-the-queen" The look on his face would be priceless...

As always this chapter is og wonderful length and glorious quality!

Keep up the magnificent work, Spleef!

Your Faithful Rviewer,
Mica

This was a really nice chapter Spleef ^^ It's amazing how you put so many details into just one chapter... It was very good and I can't wait to see more. ^^

WHEEEEEEE!!!!! Chapter 21 was soooooooo cute! It made me so happy! Keep on writing! ^-^

*loves mention of self*

Woo! I luffs the fluffy bits almost as much s the angsty bits!
...this chapter has lots of both, so obviously I enjoyed it.

The Zuko-as-firelord took me a couple of seconds to wrap my head around, but it was lots of fun to think about after that.

Your faithful Reviewer,
Mica