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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* Is Katara...Pregnet (spelling?) Oh no! Once again, an AWSOME chapter! Gone to read more...
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...totally rocks!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The part where Zuko was eating out Katara...that was so hawt.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
Me: IS KATARA...No I should not ruin the surprise for myself...
Inner child: Too bad cause the other half of u doesn't care!
Me: Yes tell us please!
Me: IS KATARA...No I should not ruin the surprise for myself...
Inner child: Too bad cause the other half of u doesn't care!
Me: Yes tell us please!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luved it, keep up the good work.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good. hm...katara pregnant? have 2 wait i guess.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story makes me extremly happy, you should write more about zuko and katara together <:
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’ve just spent the afternoon reading your story and as always your work has been a pleasure to read. One thing that I’ve always enjoyed about your work is that your plots aren’t pointless and have a well developed, mature tone to them. The story actually progresses and the characters grow as well as having the desired ‘romantic’ interlude among the main pair.
Onto some minor criticism. I’ve noticed that you’ve always spelt ‘eachother’ as one word and as I’m pretty certain you know that one actually spells them as two words, ‘each’ and ‘other’, could you get the problem fixed so it doesn’t occur anymore? Another mishap that you make is occasionally forgetting to capitalise the beginning of a sentence when someone is speaking. Run on sentences have already been addressed by another reviewer so this is just a reminder to watch out for them.
Onto more positive things. I do understand that Katara and Zuko are the main characters; however could you at sometime revisit other characters, such as Sokka and Aang for a brief time for us readers? To learn about what their mindset is right now as well has how they’re doing? After all, the two boys have experienced quite a personal trauma, as well as everyone being affected by the political upheavals currently occurring.
And what’s this about Katara’s cycle being late? Makes one wonder… and smile.
Until the next chapter, may your muse continue to torment you. (It does such nice things for us readers.)
Onto some minor criticism. I’ve noticed that you’ve always spelt ‘eachother’ as one word and as I’m pretty certain you know that one actually spells them as two words, ‘each’ and ‘other’, could you get the problem fixed so it doesn’t occur anymore? Another mishap that you make is occasionally forgetting to capitalise the beginning of a sentence when someone is speaking. Run on sentences have already been addressed by another reviewer so this is just a reminder to watch out for them.
Onto more positive things. I do understand that Katara and Zuko are the main characters; however could you at sometime revisit other characters, such as Sokka and Aang for a brief time for us readers? To learn about what their mindset is right now as well has how they’re doing? After all, the two boys have experienced quite a personal trauma, as well as everyone being affected by the political upheavals currently occurring.
And what’s this about Katara’s cycle being late? Makes one wonder… and smile.
Until the next chapter, may your muse continue to torment you. (It does such nice things for us readers.)
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WALA!!!! and BAM. Just like that. BRILLIANT writing, not my level, but you really have a good style. I like your vocabulary, and it's like you selected each word for a purpose. It's like an all you can eat buffet of Zutara, put together into one yummy piece. mmmmmmmmmmm XD you have been BLESSED! so pray continue forever and ever and ever in your writing^^
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I luved it