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Yay! New chapter! >does a happy dance< I check every day just to see if a new chapter has been posted! (Yeah, I'm a dork, I know.) This chapter was kinda creepy, definitly gettin' in the Halloween mood. ^-^ Zuko...overpossesive much? But considering the lack of familial affection he's recieved I can understand how he'd be all "MINE!" with someone he loved. However the thing that those demon things are sent by the gods does not bode well. I hope this has a happy ending, I just read RedNovember's "The Hunter and the Prey" and it made me cry ('cuz I'm a sap). This new chapter made my day! Thanks! ^-^

I am sorry to say but you can't use "The Deserter" in your story because that was episode 16 and "The Fortuneteller" was 14, we have missed an episode. Don't worry I missed it too. The key thing about episode 15, "Bato of the Water Tribe", is that Aang was able to get Katara's necklace back from Zoko. That would so miss your lovely story up. You can read about it at www.tv.com Also you can see sceen caps at www.firebender.com

Hi there, this chapter was pretty cool. It was also very deep when you combine both the dream & spirit worlds together. That was pretty neat. I'm glad Katara feels better and things are working out between her and Zuko. Good luck with the rest of the chapters of the story and your sequel for this. I'll look forward to it with open arms. See you soon. Good luck with chapter 23, post it real soon.

Brilliant piece of work. Absolutely brilliant. I won’t go on with praises for too long, but it was the best read I've had in a long time. Thanks for it.

On a more personal note however, you got my hopes up with talk of 'punishing' Katara. Not to influence what you write, but it would be nice to see some in depth bondage somewhere in here.

That aside, it was quite well written, and regardless of where you go with it, I'll keep reading, and enjoying.

-Thomas

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleases Write More Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great chapter!! i can't wait for more...but i REALLY hope that Katara isn't pregnant. not to be mean but that would ruin things. i'm still looking forward to knowing where Aang and Sokka are. Keep up the work

Oh my gosh! This was so incrediably touching! *sniff sniff* So awsome, it portrays human insticts, and emotions. And best of all, love conflicts! High five sister!

shit...this is a good story! how do you write so fucking good?

yay! there bak togethor

Aww... That was so sweet! Great Story!