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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that wuz awsum, draw the seen where Zuko wuz fighting the dark spirit!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil mommy spirit thing...I'm glad she's gone. The sleep in you thing was so sweet...I lurv ZukoxKat...can't wait fo r more!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O! That was awesome! That was cool, the ghost thing. Was that really part of the ATLA story, or did you make the legend up? Ya know, I am reading this book that says 'the best stories never end' well, this is one of the best stories i have ever read, so, I do hope it never ends. Are you going to make a third one? I hope so, I wouldn't have any storys to look forward to :( See ya next chapter!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tht was amazing! good job. so, katara's mother was actually controlled by a dark spirit? interesting. i hope zuko and katara don'y have any horrible dreams any longer.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter Spleef ^^ It was very nicely detailed :) I can't wait to see more ^^
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, I'm glad you came back. This chapter is pretty neat. Did you see the latest Avatar episode, it was pretty cool. I'm glad things are working out between Zuko and Katara, also that Hana is finally free to do what she wants and choose her own life. Good luck with chapter 24 and the rest of the story. I also do hope you get some inspirations for your next one, the sequel you said that might happen. I wish you the best of luck, I know it will be as good as the ones that came before it.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I don't meant to be rude or to rush you ,but can you please post chapter 23 up here real soon? We're all dying to see what happens next to Zuko and Katara. The suspense is killing me. Please write more real soon!!!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you post chapter 23 up here real soon. We're all dying to see what happens next. If I was being pushy, I'm sorry I was just curious to see when you'll update this. Anyway keep up the good work and hope to see you real soon. Good luck with the next story.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm...Hi. I love your story but two small comments: Watch out for redundancy in your word choice (I would hazard a guess that you type chapters up fast to post them for us rabid fans, but it's something to consider) and in Chapter 5 you have Zuko remove his pants twice in the same scene...Just two picky little things. I love your story! SQUEEEE!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Pleases write more soon.